Comments | sga_flashfic: You're Pretty Good Looking (For a Girl) by trinityofone (Amnesty 2006/Not Happening Challenge) 2/2

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You're Pretty Good Looking (For a Girl) by trinityofone (Amnesty 2006/Not Happening Challenge) 2/2

Dec 27, 2006 10:37

CONTINUED FROM PART I

( You're Pretty Good Looking (For a Girl), Part II )

challenge: not happening, amnesty 2006, author: trinityofone

Comments 135

jargonelle December 27 2006, 19:06:03 UTC

Aw!!! This is brilliant! I've a new appreciation for Cadman now and I love all the issues you worked in regarding her and Rodney's different lives.

'"I told you, it is five-year plan! Slow seduction. Courtly. Gentlemanly. Works every time."' and 'Cadman grinned. "What's the proper guy response here? Do I give you a high five? Say," she lowered her voice to a deep bass Rodney had saved for Darth Vader impersonations, "'Good man!'"' made me laugh out loud, but there are many other excellent parts and it would be a bit over the top to quote them all!

trinityofone December 27 2006, 19:32:20 UTC

Oh, I love you, fast reader person! I'm so glad you liked it and that it made you laugh. Thanks!

amothea December 27 2006, 19:43:54 UTC

I really loved this story!!!! :) I thought you really captured the character voices. :)

trinityofone December 27 2006, 19:58:13 UTC

Thank you so much! I had a lot of fun with the dialogue in this.

turtlespeaks December 27 2006, 19:52:43 UTC

My mind is just a circular message "OMGHAWTGUHGUHOMGOMGOMG!!"

My mind is blown!

And I love how you kept Rodney in Cadman's body. That was a brave and good move.

Also. . . am I shallow, shallow whore for wanting them to have babies. :> I mean, accidents happen.

trinityofone December 27 2006, 20:00:47 UTC

Well, if you're a shallow whore, I'm one too. *ashamed* There was actually almost an epilogue with Nobel Prizes and pregnancy and other craziness, but it felt too sudden and tacked on. Still...maybe a sequel?

I should never say that. I'm so bad at delivering with sequels!

Anyway, thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!

amireal December 27 2006, 20:40:43 UTC

I HEARTILY ENCOURAGE THIS.

temporalrose December 27 2006, 21:43:27 UTC

I loved this and I, too, had the immediate thought of "BABIES!!!" especially with the John touching 'Rodney's belly, protectively, possessively.' So I say yea to the sequel!

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amireal December 27 2006, 20:18:41 UTC

EEE.

Best part? This totally leaves room for more. *koff*

p.s. your mirror is now in my purse!

trinityofone December 27 2006, 20:27:08 UTC

*g* Thank God! The Evil Muppets approve!

This totally leaves room for more. *koff*

See above comment. ;-)

your mirror is now in my purse!

Yay! That makes me happy!

lilac_way December 27 2006, 20:22:43 UTC

I love this story with an unholy love. This was such a great flip on the genderswap! John doesn't want Rodney BECAUSE he's in a woman's body. John has to be convinced to "do" girl!Rodney. The dialogue was great -- Rodney wanting to talk about what is happening between them and John desperately wanting to STOP talking about it.

I also adored the end -- with Cadman having the hot gay sex with Lorne, and John wanting to send pictures of his new "girlfriend" to his father.

trinityofone December 27 2006, 20:31:21 UTC

Thank you so much! I just had this image in my head...

Rodney: Check out my hot girl body!
John: I'm gay.
Rodney: Oh, you have got to be kidding me!

It didn't quite come out like that, but still. *g*

Oh, and John's father has totally had to up his consumption of migraine medication.