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fic: Scar Tissue [body modification challenge]

Dec 08, 2006 22:08

Title: Scar Tissue
Author: Tielan
Summary: Every mark has a history.
Pairings: John/Teyla, Teyla/Rodney, Rodney/Ronon, Ronon/John.
Rating: hard R
Characters: John, Teyla, Rodney, Ronon
Wordcount: 1,700
Notes: I didn't think I'd get this in by the due date, actually; figured I was just going to end up posting it solo. Slash is not my regular bunny ( Read more... )

challenge: body modification, author: tielan

Comments 37

almightychrissy December 8 2006, 12:36:30 UTC

Oh this is LOVELY. I really enjoy all the pairings, and I didn't even notice that there wasn't any Teya/Ronon ;) The cigarette burns were chilling-- poor John-- but there was so much hot (and a very comforting and sweet sort of hot in that last case) to make up for it.

tielan December 8 2006, 20:02:39 UTC

Thank you! I was going for quietly sensuous (and hot) with each of the ficlets.

ts5000 December 8 2006, 12:52:14 UTC

Oh thank you - for all the different pairings. Each was unique and so well described and told a new aspect of that character. Love them all.
:)

tielan December 8 2006, 20:03:51 UTC

You're welcome! I have my favourites in the pairing stakes, but I am a bit of a multi-shipper at heart.

seratonation December 8 2006, 13:50:12 UTC

this was really good, I loved how you moved from one to the other, and I especially love how (like the persone above said) how you reveiled something new about the character. I can't seem to pick a favourite :) I loved them all, even if I rarely read any of these pairings.

PS: I love the song, and the sub titles fit really really well with each pairing. just loved *hearts*

tielan December 8 2006, 20:05:16 UTC

The song was entirely accidental - the lyrics to Scar Tissue were the last thing I looked at before I posted the story - and it surprised me how well they fit.

Thanks!

sgatlantislight December 8 2006, 16:05:24 UTC

Oh, I love this-- the circular nature of it. I want to know if Rodney's slow exploration of Ronon is inspired by how much he likes that Teyla does this for him. I wonder if Teyla's noticed John's cigarette burn scars and if he told her. I wonder how it happened that the various pairings got together. This makes me think "thinky thoughts" but I like that it doesn't answer them-- that it's just these little snapshots of them together.

tielan December 8 2006, 20:08:04 UTC

*is pleased*

Snapshots are definitely enjoyable to write. Easier than some of the plot stuff I've been trying to do lately.

Thank you!

marag December 8 2006, 16:07:00 UTC

Wow, very cool! I like what we learn about the characters here.

tielan December 8 2006, 20:08:31 UTC

Thanks! :)