Virgin Challenge: The Greater and the Lesser and Those of the Becoming by Brighid

[mz_bstone]

Challenge: Virgin
Title: The Greater and the Lesser and Those of the Becoming
Spoilers: None.
Rating: PG-13
Author: Brighid
Summary: It would do well.
Note: This is probably not what they were thinking of. Explanatory note at the end. For Lisa-Lisa and the Cult Jam. Not mine, not for profit. Or prophet.

Comments

[cathexys]

omg...that was brilliant and horrid and all kinds of other things. We get way too few utterly alien point of views and you really managed that alienness and differnt value system and even different temporal sense.

Wonderful! Thank you!!

[kbk]

*big eyes* *big huge wide eyes*

Duuuuude. Creepy. Cool.

[palebluebell]

Oh my. That's amazing. The detail of the world you conjured up gave this such depth, the ideas on the Wraith's world were fascinating. And now I am disturbed beyond the telling of it, because...ew! Nasty Wraiths - ick! But such a *good* story.

[icarusancalion]

Now that was fascinating. Scary. But fascinating.

What a great take on the virgin concept. *blinks* Wow.

Egad, though, I kept picturing an alternate universe young John Sheppard.

Icarus

[lapislaz]

Whoa. (goes back and reads again) Shit, whoa. My Ghod that is incredibly wonderfully creepy.