i hope you take seriously, by SomeInstant (S, D, and R&R Challenge)

[someinstant]

i hope you take seriously the suggestion of undressing
by SomeInstant

Summary: It had seemed like such a nice planet. Steady job, good provider, nice house-- the kind of planet your mother would like you to date, if your mother were insane and indifferent to the idea of grandchildren.
Rating: a light and pleasant R, McKay/Sheppard
Spoilers: Vague

Comments

[adannu]

Mmm, henna, sex, drugs, and rock and roll. *grin*

Rock on.

[someinstant]

This is totally the Dr. Feelgood of flashfic challenges.

Glad you liked the story.

[kuonji14]

very cute. I love the first paragraph, and the 52 tiles (such a mystery), and the lizard.

[someinstant]

::grins:: Thanks!

I really can't take credit for the lizard and eyeball-licking bit; most of those lines are direct quotes courtesy of a friend's Adventures in Tripping.

[flosspyromaniac]

OOh, I love what you did with this prompt... the lisping woman was inspired. Very, very nice ^.^
♥
Floss

[someinstant]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

And orginally, the toothless mystic was going to have more lines, but I got really tired of trying to figure out what letters she'd mess up after a while.

[zing_och]

Hee. Nice take on the drugged-by-aliens thing. I like it a lot.

[someinstant]

Thanks!

[emeraldsword]

I LOVE this! The slogan for the Athosian rotgut is genius, as is Rodney telling Elizabeth she has mom-hair, and I love the 'this isn't recreation, it's diplomacy' line too. Hilarious, great job!

[someinstant]

Yay! I'm glad you enjoyed reading. :)

And I think this sort of diplomacy would be a lot more effective than the let's-sign-a-treaty-and-babble sort, don't you?