The Beatings Will Continue Until Morale Improves, Part 2 by Smitty

[smittywing]

Part One

Comments

[grey_bard]

Oh. Oh! Just... classic. Bill the goat and Quark the cat and delightful, delicious mayhem. I love this beyond all reason.

[smittywing]

*beam* Thanks! Bill and Quark were fun. :)

[sunn_doyouknow]

Bwahahahaha!!!! OMG! This is the greatest ever! I really really liked Lorne in this. His voice seemed spot-on from what we've seen of him. Crazy zoomies! Go Air Force Go!

[smittywing]

Thank you! Lorne turned out to be really fun to write. :)

[hinokumo]

This was absolutely hilarious! And an awesome backstory for Lorne and Sheppard :D I had so much fun reading this!

[smittywing]

Thank you! It was fun to write, too. ;)

[concernedlily]

Hee! This is genius. I love evil cadet John and Rodney's soft yet vengeful centre when it comes to his pet. The matter-of-fact affection of their relationship is lovely.

[smittywing]

*beam* Thanks!

Rodney's soft yet vengeful centre

I love that description. Do you mind if I put it on an icon?

[concernedlily]

Not at all, feel free!

[copracat]

Classic! And fabulously funny. I enjoyed it very much.

Also, wonderful, wonderful Major Lorne.

I felt a little bit overwhelmed by all the jargon in the first part but found it fairly easy to get the idea from context rather than following the links. The pace really carried me along!

[smittywing]

Thank you! Lorne turned out to be so much fun to write. I'm really glad you could follow the jargon from context because I couldn't figure out a way to put in definitions that didn't disrupt the reading of the story.