Go Forth, by Frostfire--Darkness challenge

Jul 08, 2005 21:54

Here, in the firelight, in the forest, she dances. Her people around her, making music and feeding the fire, and she whirls with sticks held loosely and lightly in her palms, spinning and ready against the opponent who does not come from the sky tonight, but has in the past and will in the future.

This is the battle that they will never win. That ( Read more... )

amnesty i, challenge: darkness, author: frostfire

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frostfire_17 July 9 2005, 20:47:20 UTC
Thanks! She so does. Plus she's dead sexy in that stick costume.

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calijirl5150 July 9 2005, 05:36:57 UTC
Usually not a Teyla fan, however I loved the way you wrote the story about how they will "stay alive". Great job.

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frostfire_17 July 9 2005, 20:48:33 UTC
Funnily enough, usually neither am I. But she was the only character that fit with the story I wanted to write...and maybe now I like her a bit better. (Plus she's so sexy! I can't get over it!) Glad you liked it!

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shetiger July 9 2005, 05:53:25 UTC
Oh, oh, oh. Oh yeah.

That's both profound and very, very sexy.

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frostfire_17 July 9 2005, 20:49:58 UTC
Thanks...that's what I was going for. That's really what Teyla at her best is, in the show...glad you liked it.

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astolat July 9 2005, 06:04:26 UTC
Oh yay -- both sexy and very real, very vivid. Yum.

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frostfire_17 July 9 2005, 20:50:30 UTC
Thanks! *spends a few minutes drooling at Teyla in her sticks costume*

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jic July 9 2005, 06:30:22 UTC
I like dancing =D Great sensory imagery with needles and old leaves underfoot.

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frostfire_17 July 10 2005, 03:03:33 UTC
Oh, me too. Have always wished I could dance.

If I give a blanket reply to all your comments, does that make me a bad person? I'm really flattered that you've read/liked/commented on so many of my fics. (opening my email and seeing this loooong list of comments from you--frost: "huh? is lj glitching? ohhhhh....dude, yay!") Thanks! ^_^

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jic July 10 2005, 03:27:13 UTC
No, it doesn't. (Of course, my roommate says it makes you evil and I should hate you now, but she says that about low-signal wireless networks and microwave popcorn, too.)

And, dude. 'Twas the least I could do: you put them in Memories!

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