Strange Attractors by Zoe Rayne (slave challenge)

[z_rayne]

Title: Strange Attractors
Pairing: Sheppard/McKay
Rating: NC-17
Challenge: sga_flashfic - slave challenge

Summary: Of all the things he'd wanted but been sure he'd never get, John Sheppard was at the top of the list.

A/N: This is a darker take on the scenario I wrote in Icing on the Cake. You should probably read Icing first, if only so the set-up makes

Comments

[ficklememeer]

Oh my gosh. This was sooooo soooooooo powerful! I'm near tears here. Beautifully written, my dear. And I echo forcryinoutloud's statement. This is begging for a sequel!

[z_rayne]

*hands you a hankie* Thank you so much.

I'm lousy at sequels (and I'm not sure John and Rodney can be easily fixed after this, either), but I have no problem with someone else writing a continuation.

[ficklememeer]

*pout* I'll bake you cookies... *wink*

[fenris_wolf0]

I agree. This cannot be fixed overnight: I can see the recovery from victims to friends taking years and lovers? Maybe never.

Still, I would love to see a continuation -in character- that did not ignore what happened. It could take hundreds of pages! Logically it should take at least 300-500 pages. :D

(Note that sadistic readers like me do not mind overlong fics especially with built-in ansgt and emotional engagement: no sex needed as long as the protagonists suffer beautifully and realistically... )

[z_rayne]

*laughs*

I think the longest thing I ever wrote was 17,500 words and that was RPS. *g* No, I somehow doubt I'm going to manage a 500-page epic sequel to this.

[fenris_wolf0]

Which is why you need the practice: practice makes perfect!

Your built-in audience is ready and waiting. Please feel free to practice on us. Or not: I'd settle for another SGA fic from you (never let it be said that your readers are demanding or anything...)

[z_rayne]

What if that was it? What if I shot my wad with that one story, and there are no more stories for me to tell. *g*

God, I hope not!

I think there'll be more stories forthcoming, but no sequels.