Inflorescence, Teyla/Sora, PG

[latentfunction]

Title: Inflorescence
Author: latentfunction
Rating:PG
Pairing: Teyla/Sora
Spoilers: Written with knowledge up to 403, but nothing specific.
Word Count: ~ 6500.
Written For: bluflamingo
Prompt: Pre-Atlantis, Pegasus outlook on life, flowers.
Author's Notes: Thanks to anamart for the beta.
Summary: I have known you for most of your life.

Comments

[bluflamingo]

Wow, thank you - that was *exactly* the kind of thing I was hoping for. I love your ideas about the culture differences between Earth and Pegasus, especially the flower ceremony with the babies at the beginning - that was lovely.

It was great to see the hints of the Genii being more than Teyla realises they are at this point, how clear they are to us because we know, but how much sense they still make to Teyla in the context of what she knows when she hears them, if that makes sense.

The ending was lovely as well; I like that their cultures, despite being similar and closely allied, have this difference that makes things between them impossible, and that Teyla sticks to her convictions despite wanting something - that seems very like Teyla to me.

Thank you again for writing this for me, I really love it.

[latentfunction]

I'm glad you liked it, and especially the ending! I'd thought it would end differently, but sex-in-a-field and then skipping-off-into-the-sunset just didn't fit Teyla here. I really enjoyed this prompt, and I'm so happy you enjoyed it! Thank you for the lovely feedback.

[lunabee34]

Wow.

Your world building here is exquisite.

Lovely, lovely character piece for both of them.

[latentfunction]

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[latentfunction]

The hide and seek part was fun to write! I'm glad you liked it.

[semirose]

Oh I just found this fic and it's so lovely. I've read it 3 times today and I just love it every time.