The fade to black isn't abrupt--it works well! I like the slow development, especially as neither of them is the impetuous sort. Oh, and I love that it's set during "Unending"!
I tried to write it, but like I said, I really don't know what I'm talking about since I've never done it myself. Not to mention, as a Christian, I have no business focusing on that anyway, nor contributing to anyone else doing so. In the end, I decided to leave it off and am pleased that others appreciated that.
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Thank you!
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I tried to write it, but like I said, I really don't know what I'm talking about since I've never done it myself. Not to mention, as a Christian, I have no business focusing on that anyway, nor contributing to anyone else doing so. In the end, I decided to leave it off and am pleased that others appreciated that.
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