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skydiver119 November 21 2007, 18:25:33 UTC
very nice fic sam :)

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majorsamfan November 21 2007, 19:15:06 UTC
Thanks!

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ainsley November 21 2007, 21:03:24 UTC
The fade to black isn't abrupt--it works well! I like the slow development, especially as neither of them is the impetuous sort. Oh, and I love that it's set during "Unending"!

Thank you!

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majorsamfan November 21 2007, 23:04:34 UTC
Thanks. I'm glad you liked it! I really enjoyed exploring how those two might hook up.

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beatrice_otter November 21 2007, 22:58:08 UTC
The fade-to-black works well, and I for one would like to thank you for not adding gratuitous sex scenes.

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majorsamfan November 21 2007, 23:03:56 UTC
Thanks. And you're very welcome.

I tried to write it, but like I said, I really don't know what I'm talking about since I've never done it myself. Not to mention, as a Christian, I have no business focusing on that anyway, nor contributing to anyone else doing so. In the end, I decided to leave it off and am pleased that others appreciated that.

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ryf November 22 2007, 07:24:55 UTC
Beautiful story, I like how you write Teal'c. And don't worry, the end is not abrupt, I like it.

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majorsamfan November 23 2007, 06:36:30 UTC
Thanks very much. I enjoyed doing this so much more than I ever could have anticipated.

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