Fic: Shopping Trip, part 1 of 3

[sg_fignewton]

Title: Shopping Trip
Author: Fig Newton (sg_fignewton)
Rating: PG
Pairing: none
Word Count: ~12,000
Summary: Jacob and Selmac take SG-1 on an off-world shopping trip. The results, naturally, are par for the course.
Warnings: none
Spoilers: Takes place immediately after the events of Seth, with occasional vague references to events in Seasons 1-2.
Disclaimer:

Comments

[kalquessa]

Love Jack's fishing for a straight line so he can work in an Oz referrence. Also the "vibes" bit. Hee. I love Jack O'Neill.

[sg_fignewton]

Hee! Y'know, it was Jack and Daniel's friendship that first really drew me into SG-1 fanfiction. And I've hesitated all this time about trying to write in Jack's voice, and it just... worked. An incredible relief, really. :)

[kalquessa]

I love their banter. My first ever attempt at SG-1 fanfic was a little pointless snippet of Jack-and-Daniel banter. They're so much fun to write!

[sg_fignewton]

"Jack."
"Daniel?"
"Jack!"
"Okay, okay!"

...See? Easy as anything. :) :)

[maranya14]

"You can't tell me that my boxers are a security risk!" Bwah!

An this one was my personal favourite, mainly because I could pisture Jack's glee: "We're off to see the wizard!"

I'm working my way back though your fic list and ran across this one - having the gang go off on an inter-planetary shopping trip with a stolen credit card is. Pure. Genius.

[sg_fignewton]

Oh, thank you! Feedback on older fics is infinitely sweeter, somehow. :)

And yay for your liking my Jack lines - this was my first Jack POV fic, and I'm really happy it worked so well!

[cesy]

This made me giggle. Jack is wonderful. And Daniel struggling with languages, and not sure whether he's happier about the ones he does know or the ones he doesn't.

[sg_fignewton]

Thank you! This was my first Jack POV fic, so I'm delighted to hear how well he reads for you. As for Daniel... well, he probably wasn't sure which way was better either. :)