Waiting for Daniel (PG)

Sep 14, 2009 22:57

Summary: Jack takes a bleak look at seven years of waiting for Daniel, and wonders if he's ever coming back.

Episode tag for Full Circle, with references to Stargate: the Movie and the first six seasons of SG-1. Angst level set rather high. ~1,250 words. Rated PG ( Read more... )

my sg-1 fic

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with_apostrophe September 15 2009, 16:37:45 UTC
Lovely and bittersweet. This is wonderful. You say so much in very few words. It's so very well observed.

I love the irony of the ending, and that Jack doesn't make that mistake again.

BTW - HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

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sg_fignewton September 15 2009, 18:50:01 UTC
Heh, yes - ironic in that Daniel's actually alive and well on Vis Uban. And, as you say, he's pretty stubborn about it in Threads, isn't he?

So glad you liked it, and thanks for the good wishes. :)

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aurora_novarum September 15 2009, 16:52:44 UTC
Love the Jack voice you have in this fic, in the subtle turns of phrase and changes in thought.

Lovely bittersweet fic, fig. (And because it cannot be said enough today, HAPPPY HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!!!)

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sg_fignewton September 15 2009, 18:59:11 UTC
I still find serious Jack-voice difficult, so thank you - I'm really glad this works.

And yay for birthday wishes! :)

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hooloovoo_42 September 15 2009, 18:43:37 UTC
*sniffle*

Have a Happy Happy Birthday with plenty of SG-1.

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sg_fignewton September 15 2009, 18:59:36 UTC
Glad you liked it, and thank you! :)

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holdouttrout September 15 2009, 19:45:56 UTC
Oooh. What a grim and yet hopeful interpretation of that relationship. Jack always fighting his inclination to do and waiting instead, and Daniel always coming back, even when he isn't.

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sg_fignewton September 15 2009, 20:54:18 UTC
Both grim and hopeful - yeah, that about sums up Jack and Daniel, right there. Contradictions R Us.

Thanks! Very glad you liked it. :)

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sela21k September 15 2009, 21:18:06 UTC
Happy Birthday Wishes!

Loved this.

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sg_fignewton September 15 2009, 21:34:20 UTC
Thank you!

(also, icon love!)

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