Results: Round 3 // Challenge 4

Nov 05, 2009 21:10

Banner maker this week is hsapiens.

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beeej November 6 2009, 04:14:51 UTC
- 20: There is no sharpness and it's too brown.
- 20: (The text, cropping and coloring on the icon doens't give me the "woah" feeling when I compare it with the other icons.)
- 20: This icon has a great, funny line but the text does not fit the icon and the tinytext is just distracting and not well placed
+ 20: Excellent crop, nice use of gradient, great text
+ 20: beautiful clarity of image; excellent cropping and perfect font choice together with exquisite use of background texture.
+ 20: Perfect caption, great text treatment (striking and clear, love the color of the block behind the text and the way it works geometrically with the image above). Gorgeous work on the figures (coloring, depth, masking), terrific choice of background. Gives me an off-balanced feeling, even though the flush-right text box placed in the lower third of the space does a good job of weighting the image and anchoring it against the nebulous whiteness of the upper right corner, but that mixture of balanced elements and unbalanced feel effectively complements the play of weight and strength between the two figures in the image, and illustrates the theme of sexual tension in a subliminal way I find really appealing in addition to the more obvious position and phallic imagery in the Cam-Teal'c martial clinch.

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