Prompt 85.02

Nov 24, 2009 10:43

Five letters Jack wrote but never sent.

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five letters jack wrote but never sent. originalrahrah December 7 2009, 23:38:29 UTC
Charlie - my dearest child. If I could re-live one moment in my life, it would be that instant before you reached for my gun. To be there; to stop you; to yell, to lecture and to hug the stuffing out of you after smacking your wrist. To erase that look of total despair from your mother’s eyes forever.

Janet - my friend. you kept my heart beating, my blood flowing and my nano-what-u-macallits in check forever. You didn’t over rule my objections nearly enuff for my own good. You kept all my secrets.

Mom - you weren’t always wrong.

Laira - How is everything on Edora? The weather okay? Are you keeping the elders in line? Did Garan patch the kayak?

Daniel - I can’t do this anymore. I want you with me for all eternity. I demand you stop traveling to foreign places and sticking you nose in where it don’t belong! No more disappearing and returning all broken and bloody. Absolutely no more saving the world. I mean it.

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Re: five letters jack wrote but never sent. lilyleia78 December 8 2009, 01:30:07 UTC
Aw, Janet. And Charlie!

And, yes Daniel, stop with the heroics and start making Jack breakfast in bed already! :) ♥

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Re: five letters jack wrote but never sent. sidlj December 8 2009, 03:18:43 UTC
Laira! Good choice. Jack must have thought about her so often in the weeks and months after he came home.

Aw, but Daniel's the one he'll never stop thinking about. But it's just as well he didn't send the letter. Better to have Daniel think it's his own idea when he finally gives in to Jack's subtle but relentless pressure and settles down. :-)

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Re: five letters jack wrote but never sent. emgeetrek December 8 2009, 04:03:07 UTC
Very nice! I especially like the one to Laira--the kayak part made me chuckle!

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Re: five letters jack wrote but never sent. skieswideopen December 8 2009, 05:04:28 UTC
I love #3 and #5. Very succinct and very Jack.

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