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Prompt 79.04

Sep 03, 2009 13:29

Five people Jack kisses at his retirement party (after he's had a few).

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Part 2/2 theeverdream September 7 2009, 05:11:29 UTC

3) The party in Jack’s house was in full swing. There was good food and good cake and good beer. But it wasn’t good enough. Jack searched the house for Daniel. He found him on the back deck looking just the slightest bit tipsy. Jack grabbed his wrist, pulling him inside the house and down the hall towards the bedrooms. Daniel spluttered a little but allowed himself to be led.

When they got to the door of Jack’s room, Daniel finally managed to ask, “Jack, what’s going on?”

“I’ve waited years for this, Daniel. I can’t wait anymore.”

Daniel looked confused. “Wait, what?”

Jack blinked. What did he mean, what? Jack couldn’t speak; he just opened the door and pushed Daniel inside. He took a step towards Daniel, close enough to touch. Then he took another, smaller step - now he was close enough to make his intentions clear ( ... )

Re: Part 2/2 _xanthia September 15 2009, 05:00:36 UTC

Ach. You need the hilarity of #5 to cancel out the angst of #4, don't you? Because, yeah, #4 is too sad to contemplate. :P

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 15 2009, 05:21:31 UTC

Yeah. Poor #4 Jack. :( I certainly didn't want to put that one last!

Re: Part 2/2 rebeccavoy September 15 2009, 08:00:00 UTC

I love how you approached this prompt. And #4 - oh man, you made me cry!

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 17 2009, 00:06:05 UTC

Thank you! Although I can see a tipsy Jack kissing a bunch of people at one party, this idea popped into my head and really grabbed my attention.
*hands you a tissue*

Re: Part 2/2 the_summoning_d September 15 2009, 09:12:05 UTC

I'm a little bit in love with this whole premise, but number 5 wins because it made me LAUGH LIKE A CRAZY PERSON XD

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 17 2009, 00:06:49 UTC

Awww, thanks so much. It's great to be able to make people laugh!

Re: Part 2/2 archersangel September 15 2009, 18:43:12 UTC

i love the multiple universes idea

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 17 2009, 00:07:07 UTC

Thanks! :-)

Re: Part 2/2 sidlj September 15 2009, 20:24:39 UTC

Awesome, awesome take on the prompt! Which was mine, btw, so thank you! :-)

#4 is too painful to even contemplate, isn't it? Ow.

Jack/Jacob? Who knew? LOL

Re: Part 2/2 _xanthia September 15 2009, 21:21:43 UTC

It puts a whole new spin on the times Jack has called him "Dad." *giggles* Would you like some brain bleach now? :P

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 17 2009, 00:08:02 UTC

o_O *dies*

bleach yesplz

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 17 2009, 00:07:46 UTC

Glad that you liked it :-)

Yes... poor 4. And Jacob, I figured with multiple universes, at least one of them could be totally off the wall :-D

Re: Part 2/2 antares04a September 16 2009, 15:56:23 UTC

*lol* I think I take universe number 3.

The poor multiverse - all this problems with Daniel. *g*

Re: Part 2/2 theeverdream September 17 2009, 00:09:10 UTC

Yay for #3! Hehee.

And yeah... I could totally just see Daniel messing with the fabric of space-time without meaning to or realizing it.. hehe :)

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