Prompt 53.03

Sep 04, 2008 09:52

Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. chattycatsmeow September 15 2008, 22:01:07 UTC
These are all good but #3 is VERY interesting.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. chattycatsmeow September 16 2008, 03:10:16 UTC
I like that it gives us insight into two characters at the same time. Yes, the others in the set do the same to some degree, but this one shows a great deal about Jonas -

- that he was well aware Jack didn't like him,
- that he was actively trying to find a way to connect with Jack,
- that he was essentially studying Jack in a deliberate attempt to find that connection, and
- that he was willing to mold his behavior on earth in such a way as to accomplish his goal.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. chattycatsmeow September 16 2008, 03:26:05 UTC
I like exploring how you can say a lot with a few words with the 5 Things exercises,

To me that's the best part of the following this format - taking up the challenge to distill the meaning into a few words that are no less powerful. In many ways it is easier to write a regular style fic than to write a five things, which is essentially a set of drabbles. Those few well-chosen words can have a far greater impact because of their sparseness.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. dragojustine September 15 2008, 22:33:15 UTC
The image of Daniel talking in Elvish in his sleep is just LOVE.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. samantilles September 16 2008, 01:42:29 UTC
It is love!! any linguist would love it, but i squee with delight for it...

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. gategremlyn September 15 2008, 23:12:38 UTC
Such an eclectic list! The first one, especially, made me sigh.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. lilyleia78 September 16 2008, 01:15:40 UTC
A lovely, diverse list. I want to know Sam's names for things now.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. sidlj September 17 2008, 03:54:28 UTC
the way her men unconsciously flirted with any off-world woman in the right age-group

I know this one! The Puff'n'Ruffle! :-D

I like Jonas's desperate attempts to please a man who's stopped crying in his sleep and grown hard.

And Teal'c with his inexplicable Miller Lite love!

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. tresa_cho September 18 2008, 01:17:29 UTC
Woe at #1.

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Re: Five secrets that died with Janet Fraiser. anonymous September 28 2008, 15:57:56 UTC
#3 - ha, yes! Jonas, the *ultimate* suck-up!

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