Prompt 4.03

Oct 17, 2006 07:22

Five pets Jack O'Neill remembers

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sidlj October 25 2006, 16:27:29 UTC
Five pets Jack O'Neill remembers

1. Speedy the turtle. He used to lay on his tummy and watch Speedy amble leisurely across the floor when he was just a toddler. His father, who was a bit of a joker, had given the turtle its name, but Jack was too small to really appreciate the humor.

2. Frisky the cat, who laid in the sunshine all day long in a coma-like state. His Dad had named her, too, and Jack got the giggles whenever he introduced her to his friends.

3. Gretchen, his German Shepherd. It was the first pet that his parents allowed him to have - the first pet in the family which was actually, truly, completely his. He adored her, and she adored him. He has loved on sight every dog he has met since. Dogs are the best.

4. Charlie the hamster. It was his son's first pet, and he chose the name himself. Sara tried to gently steer him towards a different name, but it was no use. Charlie the hamster it was. For the three years that Charlie (the hamster) was a member of the O'Neill household, Charlie (the boy) had tiny toothmarks in the collar of every shirt he possessed. Sara complained constantly, but even she shed a tear or two when the little rodent passed on to his reward.

5. Daniel's fish. Jack took them after Daniel ascended, and he did his best to keep them alive. But, one by one, they died, and Jack felt that he had let Daniel down somehow. A while after Daniel returned, Jack confessed his shortcomings in the fish-sitting department. And Daniel confessed in turn that he could never keep the damn things alive for very long, either. He had always been buying one or two new ones every few weeks. Jack's sense of relief was out of all proportion, but then his emotions had been running pretty high recently. He needed to figure out why that was, but in the meantime, he had a trip to the pet store to make.

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rigel_7 October 31 2006, 03:03:39 UTC
I love #5.

I always thought that the team took some of Daniel's things just to keep him close.

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sidlj October 31 2006, 04:46:14 UTC
This prompt was great to write. So many ways to go, so many emotions to explore. Glad you liked it!

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msbeata October 31 2006, 19:37:09 UTC
So many great pets, but yeah, dogs are the best.

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sidlj November 1 2006, 03:45:11 UTC
I agree, totally. :-)

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starglyph October 31 2006, 19:57:03 UTC
Jack and giggles, so cute!
Loved these, esp #5 and #2. This was a fun prompt to do!

How come we didn't think of a monkey?! ;-D

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sidlj November 1 2006, 03:46:40 UTC
Because Jack doesn't think of Daniel as a pet, silly! :-D

Glad you liked!

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sef1029 November 2 2006, 18:44:33 UTC
Dogs rule!

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sidlj November 2 2006, 22:06:40 UTC
Woof!

*wags tails*

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whimsicalwhims November 13 2006, 03:35:22 UTC
Great explanation for why Jack loves dogs.

But, one by one, they died, and Jack felt that he had let Daniel down somehow.

I can just see Jack agonizing over this.

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sidlj November 13 2006, 18:45:45 UTC
And before he flushed each fish down the toilet, Jack told it that he thought he might have come to admire it.

Sorry! That was bad of me. *smacks self* :-D

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