Day Twelve | Fallen & Cursed

Jun 23, 2016 07:57

Adventurer: capricious_moon (AO3) 🌟
Prompt #: 122
Title: Fallen & Cursed
Ship(s): Kai/Lu Han, Baekhyun/D.O
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 21k
Trigger(s): brief mentions of cross-dressing
Summary: Lu Han's peaceful life takes a sharp turn when he takes in a stranger carrying a peculiar secret.
Author’s note: Dear prompter, thank you for the cute prompt! I instantly ( Read more... )

genre: fantasy, day 12, ship: baekhyun/d.o, rating: pg-13, ship: kai/luhan, words: 20k+

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alexa31 June 25 2016, 05:39:41 UTC
So, I finished this last night so late, and I was so tired that I didn't want to comment and potentially shoot myself in the foot by forgetting to say something.

Can I just say wow? Like, wowowowow???? Because this world is stunning, I love it. I never realized it until now but I love these kinds of aus!

When I first read the prompt, I had to stop for a moment. I could never have thought that this incredible fic, would come from that prompt!! And a stunning 21K at that, like O__O I honestly though that there would be a bit of crack underlying the fic, with a prompt like that LOL! This is adorable and amazing, with enough mystery and action to keep you satisfied, and even though the romance wasn't smack dab in your face, you could catch the hints all the time, and I love that. Jongin's character is so cute, and kinda smug, I love it haha. Luhan was adorable, too, but I think my favourite character had to be Yixing. Definitely. It's always the pet that's the star of the show. Always.

Cash register sounds rang in Lu Han’s ears ( ... )

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capricious_moon July 5 2016, 14:54:30 UTC
Ally!! You already know how I feel about your comment but re-reading it again makes me so ;_____;

Like I already told you, I still don't know how I whipped up 21k out of this prompt. I'm still so mystified myself like what even @_@ I suppose it is one mystery that will never be solved...

Jongin's smugness is kinda a given, I guess, what with his upbringing here as a royal so I had to balance it out with his RL sweetness and cuteness and... this is the result. I'm glad you like it though, he was really fun to write even if the fic wasn't from his POV ;___; I think I entertained myself too much with the notion of Yixing as a magical healing cat, so I'm happy he's your favorite!

LMAO I had a lot of fun writing that part with the cash register sounds, it was amusing imagining Lu Han fighting a losing battle to uphold dignity and say no to money.

[...]it's like a secretly obsessed chicken fic at times, it's hilarious...You know, when you put it like this, the fic does come off like a crack fic masquerading as a fantasy fic .___. All ( ... )

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alexa31 July 11 2016, 19:15:46 UTC
Honestly, with a fic like this, how could I not write a comment! >___<

Stunning, Mi!

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capricious_moon July 5 2016, 14:40:51 UTC
You might have to ask permission from my fic for their hand in marriage instead OuO And shh, no punching yourself. Maybe just give yourself a pat on the back for sitting through a really long fic?

Thank you for reading! I'm glad you liked it ^^

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