Another poem
Thanks for the comments and I deffinately see your points. Here is another poem, more recent than the last one I posted. Soon you will be reading some from this year, you can barely stand it can't you?
Afterglow 2-21-05
Your smell looms and lingers;
My perfume, your cologne,
You wrap my hair around your fingers.
My greatest fear now being alone.
So secure, so safe,
Your hand rests on mine;
Candle light and sweat on your face.
Slowly gliding our beautiful time.
White outside and brown hair,
The soft touch of your body;
All is calm as we lay there,
Forever, always you'll lay beside me.
Saying what deep inside we feel,
My love, my home, my escape;
from the harsh cold real.
Afterglow 2-21-05
Your smell looms and lingers;
My perfume, your cologne,
You wrap my hair around your fingers.
My greatest fear now being alone.
So secure, so safe,
Your hand rests on mine;
Candle light and sweat on your face.
Slowly gliding our beautiful time.
White outside and brown hair,
The soft touch of your body;
All is calm as we lay there,
Forever, always you'll lay beside me.
Saying what deep inside we feel,
My love, my home, my escape;
from the harsh cold real.