THE (✔)-(✖) MEME : RP EDITION ROUND ❁ 3 ▷ Comment with your username/character list. RP journals are fine too, if that's what you prefer
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Even though I like your Flyn, I can't really give you anything useful for him, because I'm probably the last derp on the planet that hasn't seen the movie yet.
Your Mitsunari, however, is dead on. Your tags carry his voice well enough that I can literally hear him, and you add enough introspection to round him out as someone dynamic and not just a one line cliche, which would be an easy thing to do with Mitsunari. I'd love to flesh this out more, but I'm on a timecrunch and have to run.
However, I really wish you had a little more faith in your play. You're intelligent and creative, and you put a lot of thought and effort into these guys - trust yourself! We wouldn't want to play with you so bad if you sucked. ;) ♥
ISHIDA MITSUNARI
Sengoku BASARA 3
trianglingly
@ D_M/HOMELESS ETC
FLYNN RIDER / EUGENE FITZHERBERT
Disney's Tangled
deadpanning
DARYAN CRESCEND
Apollo Justice: Ace Attorney
getonthetourbus
PORTGAS D. ACE
One Piece
liekburning
ISHIKAWA GOEMON
Goemon
zekkeizekkei
DASTAN
Prince of Persia: The Sands of Time
timetraceur / quickhanded / hownoble
REMUS JOHN LUPIN
Harry Potter
lycaean
HIJIKATA MAMORU
Until Death Do Us Part
notyourhusband
HOLO THE WISE
Spice and Wolf
pridefulwolf
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Your Mitsunari, however, is dead on. Your tags carry his voice well enough that I can literally hear him, and you add enough introspection to round him out as someone dynamic and not just a one line cliche, which would be an easy thing to do with Mitsunari. I'd love to flesh this out more, but I'm on a timecrunch and have to run.
However, I really wish you had a little more faith in your play. You're intelligent and creative, and you put a lot of thought and effort into these guys - trust yourself! We wouldn't want to play with you so bad if you sucked. ;) ♥
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