this poem...

[sexybrokenheart]

i think this sucks ass... but i tried to be nice and say it was good... my cousin wrote it... so how does it sound to you?

its strange how empty I feel inside
sitting all alonge with tears in my eyes
i cry and i cry and that still doesn't hide
the lonely feelings i harbor insdie
just thinking of him pushes those feelings away
puts a smile on my face, brightens my day
but longely on the inside is still how i feel
because i know in my heart his feeling aren't real
so i sit outside and cry away my day
because i know at night along i will lay