im looking up at yet another starless sky
The second stanza is horrible.
I am aware of this fact.
I've got troubled thoughts
Burning a hole through my chest, this pain takes away everything: My pride, my courage, my self-respect; my entire life, lost. I know, I shouldn't let it get to me, but don't you see? It's the city noise. It made me strange.
And the self-esteem to matchI stare ( Read more... )
I am aware of this fact.
I've got troubled thoughts
Burning a hole through my chest, this pain takes away everything: My pride, my courage, my self-respect; my entire life, lost. I know, I shouldn't let it get to me, but don't you see? It's the city noise. It made me strange.
And the self-esteem to matchI stare ( Read more... )
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i love this one alot though :D
even if its practically full of angst.
and i cant give you crit sorry, i usually put that all to critizing my own stuff.
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