BFS ENTRY: The Pocket Watch (G; Severus, Tobias, Eileen)

[iulia_linnea]

Title: The Pocket Watch
Category: One (1- to 10-years-old)
Characters: Severus, Tobias, Eileen
Author: themoreyouclean
Beta Readers: littlelizzyann and somigliana
Rating: G
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): None.
Word Count: +/- 1600
Summary: The best-laid plans sometimes have to be helped along.

Comments

[iulia_linnea]

I enjoyed this look at young!Severus' craftiness, and I'm glad that he'll have time to decide what to do with his watch. *g*

[shyfoxling]

Was this something someone without an LJ account sent in? (I'm confused why you commented on what appears to be your own fic; I assume it's not, but can't figure out whose it is...)

[iulia_linnea]

I meant to post this while logged in to the mod account, but I was tired. The anonymous author who wrote the fic does have an account (and isn't me). ;)

[alisanne]

I'm glad Severus managed to get the watch at last, especially since it was clearly meant for him, and that it (and he!) survived Nagini.
Poignant and well done. :)

[stasia]

Oh, how bittersweet and nice. I wonder to whom he wants to give the watch now. I do hope his life ends up better now that he's free from the rest of the past.

Stasia

[blackeyedlily]

A heart warming ficlet. Thank you for your gift to the big birthday bash.

[shyfoxling]

I really enjoyed this. :)