BFS ENTRY: Lemonade (G; Severus and Lily)

Jan 25, 2010 14:10



Title: Lemonade
Category: One (1- to 10-years-old)
Characters: Severus and Lily
Author: scarletladyy
Beta Reader: pollyandra
Rating: G
(Highlight to View) Warning(s): None.
Word Count: 1602
Summary: When Lily realises it's Severus' birthday, she gets a sticky idea into her head.

Lemonade )

author: scarletladyy, bfs entry

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iulia_linnea January 25 2010, 19:14:31 UTC
Thank you for this look at Severus' early life. :)

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:33:52 UTC
You're welcome - thanks for reading :)

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dickgloucester January 25 2010, 22:00:22 UTC
Poor, prickly, reluctant little Severus. This is a compelling story, as much for the insight into Lily's less-than-angelic personality as for the deft portrayal of Severus. Thank you.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:34:01 UTC
Thank you :)

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dreamy_dragon73 January 25 2010, 22:43:46 UTC
Thank you for this insightful glimpse at one of Snape's early birthdays. Poor little boy. *goes to cuddle Severus*

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:34:13 UTC
Welcomes, and thanks for reading :)

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shiv5468 January 25 2010, 23:52:50 UTC
So very emblematic of his life - nothing quite working out, always just peering in at life.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:34:43 UTC
Thank you for reading :) Oh, gosh - Lucius keeps making faces! That's the best icon ever lol.

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leela_cat January 26 2010, 01:43:17 UTC
Poor Severus, he couldn't even make lemonade with those lemons life handed him.

I do like this look at their lives, and at the dynamic between Lily and Petunia; how their fighting and teasing makes Severus react is so true to life.

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scarletladyy March 12 2010, 04:35:00 UTC
Thank you :)

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