Fanfic -- Live Free or Die Hard -- "Come Together"

[severina2001]

The reveals are out at sexy_right, which means I can now post the stories I wrote. WHEEE. Also, great fun to find out who wrote what. Yay, I love challenges and fests!

Here's the first one :)

Title: Come Together
Fandom: Live Free or Die Hard
Characters: John McClane/Matt Farrell
Word Count: 4646
Summary: He likes watching the way Matt’s hands flutter in

Comments

[yessire]

Nice I love these two! You rock!

[severina2001]

Thanks so much -- I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

[cmk418]

This was great. I love the way you write these two and Matt's back and forth with his friends was fun to read.

[severina2001]

Thank you very much! I do have a lot of fun with these two. :)

[alicedawkins]

''He counts to five and when it doesn’t happen, he opens one eye cautiously. “Um. Hi,” he says.''

Best line ever!

[severina2001]

Heeee! Glad you enjoyed it. :)

[irena_adler]

Woo, Matt's friends got more than they bargained for! But if walking in on that made them get past their hangups, it's all good. Lots of fun!

[severina2001]

Thanks so much, and thanks for reading!

[sunspot67]

Delightful. I love the playfulness of your characterizations and how you capture the humor and banter of the original.

This exchange was my favorite:

“You’re a chihuahua?”

“Oh. That’s… yeah, that’s a computer term. It refers to someone who does binary code manipulation using a pre-set algorithm with executable instruc…

[severina2001]

Thank you so so much!