Live Free or Die Hard Fanfic -- "Partners"

[severina2001]

Title: Partners
Fandom: Live Free or Die Hard
Pairing: John McClane/Matt Farrell, established relationship
Rating: R
Word Count: 5427

Comments

[devo79]

Am I first?

[devo79]

I am! OMG! I've never been the first to comment before *is proud*

So...oh, yeah. About the fic. Your John voice is perfect and I love all the little details.

*whispers* first!

[severina2001]

... and I'm glad you like the fic, too! :D

[severina2001]

Hee. I'm glad you're so excited about being first. :D

[teamane]

^.^
I fell for them in fanfiction, before I even knew there was the movie (Die Hard 4) and this is the kind of fic tha made me search for the DVD and watch it over and over. Tey fit perfectly together. It makes me want to see this on the screen.
Wonderful writing, great fic. I loved it.
:D

[severina2001]

Oh, thank you so much.

[northernwalker]

Poor John. His baby is growing up, and she's supposed to stay six forever! At least he's got Matt to console him...

You've got a really good feel for details here. Loved John's contemplating a painful dinner. :)

[severina2001]

Thanks very much. The little details seem to pop in whether I want them to or not. :)

[littlestarling]

I love the way the title perfectly defines what the story is about, the two of them being partners - going home instead of out for a beer after work, having family dinners, attending work events together. I love how you write them so domestic and yet so very HOT together!

Looks like love to me!

[severina2001]

Thank you! The funny thing about your comment is that I flailed about for ages trying to find a *different* name for the story, and finally gave up and just used it's working title. LOL

[hammerhead22]

This was absolutely lovely and your characterizations are spot on. Oh, and the sexy bits were hot!

[severina2001]

Thank you, especially in regard to the sexy bits! Sex is definitely not my forte, so I was biting my nails a bit over here. :)