Standalone: "Where I'm Needed Most"

Sep 27, 2008 04:31

Title: Where I'm Needed Most
Timeframe: Season Four cancer arc
Rating: PG
Prompt: 20 - Protection (for 25fluffyfics)
Word Count: 714

Where I'm Needed Most )

fanfic: queer as folk

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bodleian September 27 2008, 09:20:49 UTC
This is wonderful. Justin is so devoted to Brian and Brian is willing to accept his help. The word love is in there somewhere. I'm really enjoying these stories.

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severina2001 October 4 2008, 13:42:54 UTC
Thank you! It's really exciting to see so many people reading and enjoying them.

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nolyana September 27 2008, 09:52:13 UTC
*tears up*

Beauitful!

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severina2001 October 4 2008, 13:43:08 UTC
Awww. Thanks!

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brianswalk September 27 2008, 10:25:44 UTC
I adore cancer!arc fics, and this little ditty is near the top of the list. So simple and calm. The yelling is over, now comes Brian's quiet acceptance that Justin isn't going anywhere.
Lovely, Sev.

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severina2001 October 4 2008, 13:43:42 UTC
Thank you! I love them too, but the angst content can be so high that I don't write a lot of them.

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mi_nion September 27 2008, 13:15:09 UTC
I always loved that scene because I think it really started to sink in with Brian that Justin's love had matured to the "in sickness and in health" stage.

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severina2001 October 4 2008, 13:46:00 UTC
*nods vigorously* I think that Brian would/will have a hard time accepting that he is worthy of being loved despite his flaws and that Justin isn't going to leave, but it's moments like this that make him realize it. And yes, I do talk of them as though they are real and their story is ongoing. :D

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secretsolitaire September 27 2008, 14:17:07 UTC
This is so beautiful. I love the way you show how Brian's feeling with the speed of his heartbeat -- that he's still scared Justin will leave at first, and then finally starts to believe that Justin really is going to stay. *happy sigh*

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severina2001 October 4 2008, 13:47:06 UTC
Thanks very much. I thought the writing of that part was a bit clunky, but it was the best I could do with my ability + time constraint. Thanks so much for pointing it out, and saying you liked it!

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