New Quoin chapter

[severina2001]

Part Four of "Truth and Consequences" is up. In this one, Justin finally gets his "appointment" with Brian. Thanks to shanonmarie, for getting the chapter up so fast.

Links to Truth and Consequences
Part One
Part Two
Part Three
and the new Part Four

Comments

Ohhh, moremoremoremoremore!!

[viola69]

Loved this new chapter- with Brian surprising himself with how much he lets Justin in- and Justin's nervousness and eagerness and distractedness-with the garden and the art & the cookbooks! So very nice.

Re: Ohhh, moremoremoremoremore!!

[severina2001]

Thanks so much. My beta kept telling me there was too much distractedness -- she wanted me to just get to the sex already. LOL The thing with writing this story is that I'm trying to incorporate the things from the profile that I was assigned, thus the cat and the garden and the cookbooks. :)

[meimur]

So, is it to early to be requesting part 5 yet?!?! :D

I love how Brian keeps having to remind himself that Justin is just a trick. So cute.

[severina2001]

Uhhh... well, I'm working on Part Five, but I'm also working on two little standalones. The days when I focused on one story seem to be long gone.

The profile that I'm working from said something along the lines that when this Brian falls in love, he falls "hard and fast". So he's gotta keep reminding himself that this can't be, no matter how much he feels it. It's rather fun working around someone else's character profile. :)

[tinyblondeone]

Wow. Finally... :) These boys are just magnetic in any situation - you've done such a great job with the sexual tension. And the release... pure bliss. Can't wait for more of this.

(BTW, near the end the text disappears into the side graphic for me - you might want to mention this to shanonmarie)

[severina2001]

Thank you! I kinda wimped out by sticking with oral sex instead of getting straight to the nitty gritty. Glad you liked it. :) And thanks for letting me know about the text. I sent SM an email about it.

[dleigh]

*waves* Hey girl!

Okay- I read this on Tuesday (I think) and it's taken me this long to get up offa the floor. Woman!!! So good. I so love this story. I've already said this, but when I read this story, I cannot help but think of, "Jesus." It makes me happy to think of B being J's *personal Jesus*. I love that Brian is already taking note of what Justin's about. Heh...the tick marks beside Justin's imaginary *Pro vs Con* list in B's mind is fascinating

[severina2001]

D!!! **waves back frantically** Oh my god, your feedback just made my day.

It makes me happy to think of B being J's *personal Jesus*.

Mmmmm. A little mental David Gahan to start the day is alllllways good.

Very interesting indeed, how from the beginning, Justin is treated differently- B brings him back to *his* domicile and not one of the clientele rooms. Mm.

Brian's definitely a smitten kitten. Heh. But I should point out that Brian brings *everyone* back to his apartment. It's a quirk. Nobody else has seen the garden though. And PW, of course, hides from everyone but Justin. The cat has good taste. ;)

Gowritemorerightnow

Henry Rollins beckons. How 'bout I say: I'll post more when YOU do? Huh? Huh? Damn, there's a summer camp dance awaitin'!!

[lexii314]

This new chapter is GREAT.
As always I can't wait for MORE!!
thanks.

[severina2001]

Thanks!! I'm so glad you liked it. :)