Ficlet: Sherlock, "A Matter of Perspective"

Aug 31, 2010 21:24

Title: A Matter of Perspective
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: None! Gen!
Rating: PG (swears)
Word Count: 547
Summary: John Watson vs. a vending machine.... and Sgt. Sally Donovan.

You must be as mental as he is. )

fic, sherlock holmes

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cruelest_month September 1 2010, 06:28:09 UTC
Ahahaha I loved that. Ah, Sally. She's so wonderful and yet so paranoid, suspicious, and sick of Sherlock Holmes. <3 And I loved that last bit when Sherlock came in. You really have their characters down, I think.

PS - I'd be glad to beta your fic if no one else volunteers. :)

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severa September 3 2010, 18:28:50 UTC
I'd like to think I have these characters down, no matter what their incarnation ;) Am happy you enjoyed it. Sherlock did end up stealing the show as always.

I'm going to go over my fic one more time today and then e-mail it to you. And no rush on it once I do, k?

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hausfrauatu September 1 2010, 06:53:28 UTC
I would do it, but I'm not familiar with the show...yet.

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severa September 3 2010, 18:29:33 UTC
U MUST DO!

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jenavira September 2 2010, 03:39:34 UTC
LOFF. <3 I love Sally's attempt to figure them out. Doomed to failure, of course.

(I'd beta, but I'm kind of a mess right now, I can't guarantee I'd get it back to you in any decent amount of time.)

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severa September 3 2010, 18:31:50 UTC
In all fairness, the Holmes/Watson relationship has always been baffling. Sherlock is such an ass and does seem to have such a low tolerance for people why does he care for Watson so much?

In reality of course it's TRUEST OF TRUE LOVE, but that wasn't the point I was trying to get across this time.

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jenavira September 3 2010, 18:37:04 UTC
Well, yes. It is TRUE LOVE OMG, but it is not expressed in the customarily socially accepted manner. (And if it were, I'd be...very afraid.) I love their love, even if especially because Holmes is such an ass and Watson doesn't seem to care.

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marah_sarie September 3 2010, 21:26:13 UTC
Ooh, this was great! You just have their voices down perfectly, I love it.

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severa September 8 2010, 19:13:09 UTC
Thaaaaank you. <3

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ext_248116 September 7 2010, 05:38:09 UTC
And sleeping with Anderson is a slight upgrade from fucking a flea-bitten weasel. John smiled at this thought, and Sally smiled back thinking he was taking amusement in her little analogy.
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This line is golden. Heehee!
And I can totally see John stuffing his face with snacks...interestingly, as can be observed from photos, TV appearances & other evidence regarding their lives, Martin is a steady snacker. Thank God he's lost so much weight now~but it's just so cute to always see him as John eating, while Sherlock smile and watch. Very convincing. Very canon to all the Sherlock stories too.

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severa September 8 2010, 19:12:16 UTC
Watson's need to feed is only really thrown into sharp relief because of Sherlock's lack. Again, I still think about the Granada series which was occasionally very overt and that matter (my fave being in "The Priory School"), where as in Sherlock it's slightly more subtle.

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