Comments | severa: Fic: Sherlock, "The Definition of Not-Normal"

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Fic: Sherlock, "The Definition of Not-Normal"

Aug 07, 2010 14:56

Title: The Definition of Not-Normal
Fandom: Sherlock
Pairing: Sherlock/John (UST)
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2035
Summary: There's a lot of things about Sherlock Holmes John Watson is having to get used to, including his own feelings for his new flatmate.
A/N: A special thanks to lozenger8 for the beta.

( Sherlock had mentioned it, the day they met, that he played violin. )

fic, sherlock holmes

Comments 22

snowgrouse August 7 2010, 20:09:14 UTC

D'awwwwwwwwwwww<3

Also, I note you've left in some notes towards the end ("[maybe some more of John’s internal thoughts here?]"), but awww, cuteness. MARRIED.

severa August 7 2010, 20:26:36 UTC

Shit. Thought I took care of all that. Now I remember, I dithered over if or what to add and forgot I left it there to remind me. d'oh! Got rid of it. Thanks.

I think I tried to include everything I was disappointed in not getting in the second episode: Violin playing, drug use, Sherlock stealing John's adorable fisherman's jumper.

Okay, so I didn't expect that to be in an episode, I just think it'd be damn cute and a nod to the 2009 movie:

"You steal my clothes!"

"Ah, we have a barter system."

thank you for commenting! <3

jenavira August 7 2010, 21:08:03 UTC

They're adorable! <3 I love Sherlock and his "I'm not hungry. Bring me a sandwich." And John being in denial. And yes, Sherlock does need a bloody minder; lucky for him he found one by accident.

severa August 7 2010, 21:42:37 UTC

They need to make more series! I need to see their relationship come to the point when John starts becoming Mother Hen!Watson.

marah_sarie August 8 2010, 13:48:05 UTC

Ooooh, loved this. Such great interaction between the two of them, and I now need to see Sherlock stealing one of John's jumpers at some point. (Also, Mrs Hudson, just give your tenants that electric kettle and save yourself the bother of wondering what experiment Sherlock will have used it for.)

severa August 9 2010, 04:03:43 UTC

It's okay because it was John who asked for it. If Sherlock wanted it, she'd be more wary. And Sherlock in John's jumper, which would be too big yet too short, is an image I keep in my head as my happy place right now.

Thank you commenting!

beautybecks August 8 2010, 23:49:14 UTC

I love you. And Loz. So much. This is just so... right. It flows just right, their voices are pitch perfect, the ending is so, d'awwwww, yet so possible, nay, probable. I love this!

severa August 9 2010, 04:05:35 UTC

Thank you! :)

And having seen the new episode, I feel some of it has even been vindicated.

how_to_shine September 6 2010, 21:24:41 UTC

aww, sooo cute. I love the talk at the end as well, really well written.