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(08) Guest Fanfic!: A Coming-Together in Thirteen Parts by the lovely mclachlan

Jul 28, 2007 12:27

Hello! I'm so excited to be posting the first fic by one of my super fabulous Guest Ficcers. mclachlan is one of the best writers in our fandom. Her beautiful and poetic prose has actually been known to make me tear up on occasion, and that just doesn't happen. I haven't even had the chance to read this yet (!!), so I'm posting it just as she sent it ( Read more... )

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sev_4_blogathon July 28 2007, 16:39:35 UTC

*dies*

This. This is amazing. I love it and I love you.

twistinside82 July 28 2007, 16:48:26 UTC

I've been leaving mclachlan offline messages squeeing about this, but I still have to comment. This is brilliant.

RC, I love the way you write. I love that your sarcasm and snark just shines when put in your fiction. Everything you do has that bite, that sharpness. Which is perfect, but especially perfect for Brian.

So many things in this are just beyond fantastic. I can't even quote them all. I have to re-read this. Which is odd, since as I've been saying repeatedly, I don't read QaF anymore. But this, this is worth it.

ex_reizaine184 July 28 2007, 16:49:01 UTC

"Or," Brian begins loudly, slamming his fork down. Everyone falls silent. "Or, you could stay here."

"Okay." Justin shrugs airily and pops the three ziti's into his mouth.

Brian opens his mouth, closes it, and opens it again. "'Okay?'"

"Yeah, okay." Justin's smiling again, warmly. Knowingly.

"... Okay."

YES. i love it!

tamalinn July 28 2007, 17:00:44 UTC

omgyay! i purposely didn't read this when you sent it to me because i wanted to save it. and i'm glad i did. it's just what i needed today. thanks for writing it. :D

(where's #6?)

secretsolitaire July 28 2007, 17:23:15 UTC

Gah, so lovely!

Everyone clamors to him in unison, forbidding him to stay, to stifle his dreams just so he can stay with one emotionally-stunted idiot with a nine-inch cock. But Jennifer is crying and reaching over to kiss her son on the temple, thanking him for thinking it through and Debbie says that if he's staying he can't work at the diner anymore, because he's above that. Lindsay says that it's not a good idea to stay. That he has to go. Melanie grumbles into her wine.

I loved this part for your very apt descriptions of everybody. :-)