The Halfling - Part 17

Jun 07, 2015 00:44

Title: The Halfling
Pairing(s): Onkey, side 2min
Rating: R (this part)
Genre: Romance, sci-fi (?)
Disclaimer: I don't own SHINee, I don't own any of the members. Their souls and bodies belong to SM, I am only a lowly, foreign fanfic writer.
WARNING: Allusions to sexual assault, death (non-SHINee), blood, gore

No past, no future, and no home. )

onkey, fic, halfling, shinee

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seutae_yah June 8 2015, 16:28:18 UTC
you're right the hunters in the chapter were disgusting. i mean, this was a difficult chapter for me to write bc i wanted it to be detailed and graphic so you can feel just a smidgeon of what key felt. i mean he lost everything very quickly, and in a very violent way. it was definitely intense and i've lost some readers since i've updated (they were subscribers on aff). i'm not sure everyone was ready for this. and i think key having a family was a definite surprise. but i wanted to keep it realistic in terms of if a world like this existed. they would be at a stage where earth was maybe 1000 years ago? and some areas were up until a couple hundred years ago. and people living like that would have gotten married and procreated earlier so.. anyway i digress!!!

i didn't focus on onew's emotions too much in that update bc it was so focused on key's past and the realization that his brother is still alive. but i will definitely deal with onew's emotions to all this in the next chapter. he is determined to find key's brother, obviously, but he did just find out the boy he's sort of in love with had a whole family, including a child. so it's gonna have an effect. OKAY I NEED TO STOP TYPING NOW ahahah

anyway!! thank you so much for reading it honestly means the world and thank you for taking the time to comment! i was really nervous about this update bc of the intensity so hearing people liked it and weren't put off by it means so much. thank you thank you!! <3

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