More Bitching...
And yet more bitching about getting feedback for 100 word drabbles...
Uhh...dunno what to say. This story (is it supposed to be one?) is...too short. In fact, only about less than half the fic was a story. Most of the above appeared to be just information. 100 words isn't much to call a story, if you ask me. If it were
a poem, then it'd be a different story. ^^; Try to add some more to the story. I'm only saying this because, well, I honestly think the story was lacking. I'm not saying make it very long, just a decent size, like around 1,0-2,0 words long. About.^^; Well, gtg. Bye!
Uhh...dunno what to say. This story (is it supposed to be one?) is...too short. In fact, only about less than half the fic was a story. Most of the above appeared to be just information. 100 words isn't much to call a story, if you ask me. If it were
a poem, then it'd be a different story. ^^; Try to add some more to the story. I'm only saying this because, well, I honestly think the story was lacking. I'm not saying make it very long, just a decent size, like around 1,0-2,0 words long. About.^^; Well, gtg. Bye!