i wrote a new song today.....i want feedback!!!!

[sethborsch]

Needed Closure:

Run FOR(ever!) Run FOR(ever!)
Just don't forget what your'e running from
Life was never just............(JUST DEAL WITH IT!)
Your fading story from yesteryear
Is dimming now but I'll still holding you dear
Remember to come back for me

Run in circles Go in circles
'till it is dizzy and you fall down
Run in circles Life's in circles
vision's fuzzy don't let yourself drown
You get up but you fall back down
Just don't let yourself fall away

Seven minutes before the day I die
Can you wake me up so I can try
To breathe life.....again
I want to lie dormant
'till this life has run its course and
I'll use my last 7 minutes to touch you....again

If there was a way these seven minutes could be days
A week to justify what I've done with my life

Run forever Run forever.......

but come back to wake me up..........