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Dec 07, 2004 00:08

Like the scattered rain that trickles down forehead ( Read more... )

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xandras_coffee December 7 2004, 17:26:53 UTC
*laughs* Wow. That was funny. XD Brava.

~Xandra

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lucidpersephone December 7 2004, 23:28:53 UTC
Fantabulous!

Dramatic, vivd imagery. Simple phrases. Haiku-like cadence. Unexpected turn to humor. And so true!

I love it. ^.^ If your muse decides to prod you with more poetry, be sure to write it down, hm?

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