A Little Nudge in the Right Direction (H/D, PG-13)

[sesheta_66]

Now that the big reveal has taken place, I can post my contributions to 

Comments

[faynia]

when are you going to post this to harry_draco?

[sesheta_66]

Right now. I just noticed a couple typos & corrected them here first.

Thanks again for my fic, btw. At 30K+ words, and very well written, I rather suspected it was you! :o)

[faynia]

I certainly dropped enough hints >.> *g* I had fun with it...all the way until that last weekend when I rather wished it would die hahaha

[sesheta_66]

Heh. I love how you 'nudged' me to go read it, yet you didn't comment yourself. Hmmm. Anyway, even without that, the sheer word volume alone (and the writing itself, of course) were enough for me to conclude that. But I like surprises, so I didn't want to say ... "so, did you write that?"

At least you know all the pain was worth it, because I loved it. AND lost sleep just to finish reading it too!

[melmoe1]

That was so passionate, and it was only kissing-I loved it.

See that was what I was talking about-a perfect example

[sesheta_66]

Yay! Thanks. I really think my best work is like this - less detail, more story. And I absolutely melt over a great kiss.

*hugs*

Now, for my next challenge to myself, I need to start writing more descriptive stuff. I'm woefully inadequate in that area. Must strive to improve!

[alaana_fair]

Oh, this was goooood! I just love friends first fics! And Blaise and Pansy... would love to have seen their expressions. *g* Excellent job.

[sesheta_66]

Thanks ♥

[thrnbrooke]

Wow! I loved it!

[sesheta_66]

Thank you.

[graylor]

Great, smoldering kiss and a charming story overall. And they are so very polite, too!

"I think I'd like to kiss you."/"Oh."/"Is that alright with you, Harry?"/"Sure. In fact, I think I'd like that very much."/"I was hoping you'd say that."

[sesheta_66]

Heh. I never really saw that as polite, so much as I saw them tentative and apprehensive about potentially messing up their relatively new friendship.