An Incomplete Picture (H/D, PG-13)

Mar 17, 2007 15:12


Title:   An Incomplete Picture
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hd_angst, awdt, angst, h/d

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faynia March 17 2007, 19:47:47 UTC
Why is it Draco who is always in need of snuggles in these fics. Even when he's wrong, you still feel worse for him than Harry.

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sesheta_66 March 17 2007, 20:49:34 UTC
Hmmm ... I dunno. I think Harry deserves some serious hugs here, because he was wronged (by Smith), misunderstood (by the onlookers, thanks to Smith), and not believed by his boyfriend. He was trying to do the best thing for Draco, and didn't feel like he should have to defend himself. Draco didn't tell Harry what he personally saw, so what's Harry supposed to think?

But, yes, I'll agree ... Draco needs some hugs too, because his own actions have caused him to drive Harry away (for now).

Maybe you feel worse for Draco because he's SAD at the end, but Harry is still ANGRY ... and it's instinctive to want to comfort a sad person? *ponders*

Thanks for reading, btw. How's the hpslashnotsmut fic coming? I scrapped mine, and completely re-wrote it. Still not done (although ideas are bouncing around in my head, yet to be committed to cyber-paper), but should be tonight. Yeesh! I had planned on getting it out to a beta a week ago. Not good. :o(

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faynia March 17 2007, 20:54:37 UTC
It's at 7,000 words and climbing this thing is going to be lengthy I think i just barely hit 1/5 of the way in 0.o and I have less than two weeks left? Shite *cowers in a corner where things are nice and pleasant*

And because of you I went over to read the challenge and suddenly started writing trio smut....yeah I know....how does "Read my Mind" bounce to trio smut is beyond me. I need a slave driver or something or I'll keep getting distracted and never finish my hpslashnotsmut fic on time and then I'll hate myself for about a month.

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sesheta_66 March 17 2007, 20:59:46 UTC
Mine is at about 4,300 words currently and also climbing. When you say "less than two weeks," you mean "one week," right?

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ruinithil March 17 2007, 21:26:01 UTC
I hate it when Draco is too stupid to see that Harry wouldn't do that to him! Poor Harry :( But poor Draco too...mostly poor Harry. *hugs*

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sesheta_66 March 17 2007, 22:08:02 UTC
Awww ... I don't think Draco is so much stupid as he is insecure. He's been hearing how he's not good enough for Harry (Smith was saying the same thing to Harry) for a long time, so he always has that thought in the back of his mind. Then he sees a kiss, and it breaks his heart. *hugs Draco close*

Naturally, I feel for Harry, because he was definitely the 'wronged' one here. *big squishes for Harry*

Hopefully the two of them will talk it out later.

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ruinithil March 17 2007, 22:35:26 UTC
Oh, they better. *cuddles them*

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sesheta_66 March 17 2007, 22:10:43 UTC
Who in their right mind would cheat on Draco? I mean, have you seen him? *winks*

I dunno ... I might jump to a conclusion or two if I saw my man kissing someone else. Of course, I'd actually TELL him I saw it! Silly boys.

Thanks.

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charmed310 March 17 2007, 22:27:08 UTC
WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY boy!!!!

Son of a bitch! - there IS a sequel, right???

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sesheta_66 March 18 2007, 00:06:20 UTC
Um ... hadn't specifically planned one, but it sorta sets one up. Let's see if I have time for a part 2.

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dracoluvah March 18 2007, 02:47:35 UTC
I want to give hugs and loves to both of them.
My poor boys!

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sesheta_66 March 18 2007, 02:52:40 UTC
Me too. *squishes them both*

I have confidence that, after everything else they've been through, they will manage to get through this too. *nods*

Oooh ... the new boardgame is up! Hint: if you start while it's still the 17th, your magic orb move of 9 spaces will get you to "double your points." Thought you might want to know. (Yes, I just kick-started my game for that very reason). Must go work some more on my slashnotsmut fic. G'night.

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dracoluvah March 18 2007, 03:07:37 UTC
Yes ... I see the two of them getting past this
:-)

PS ... thanks for the heads up on the game ... clockwise? counterclockwise?

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sesheta_66 March 18 2007, 03:24:38 UTC
Hey! You ARE playing for another team ... how much help am I supposed to give you?!? Kidding ... it doesn't matter, because 9 will get you to that in either direction.

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