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The Dark Horse

Mar 10, 2008 17:03

Title - The Dark Horse

Summary - What is a father supposed to do when he hears whispers that his fifteen-year-old son is tainted by the very thing that killed the love of his life? John Winchester uncovers the terrifying truth about his youngest son's cruel destiny and will stop at nothing to protect him from the truth.

Rating - PG-13

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Definitely worth it! 1sweet_twilight March 11 2008, 01:05:54 UTC

This was just amazing! Thank you, thank you so much for updating! You're one of my favorite people in the world right now! I loved the dialog between John and Dean about Sam's dating situation. That was funny! And Ben, man, he's crazy! I wouldn't trust him either. I wonder if he'd ever really try to see his nephews? Ben seems like the person that's been traumatized one too many times and has been left void of emotion. It's interesting though, how much their stories parallel.
I love it. I can't wait for more! I'm so excited now!

Re: Definitely worth it! seriously_sam March 11 2008, 20:40:15 UTC

Haha, thank you so much for the kind review. I'm glad that I could make your day with a new installment of The Dark Horse! This is such a serious story (especially the next two chapters) so I really needed some light-hearted moments. Talking about Sam's sex life? Priceless opportunity. Ben is terribly unstable. He's seen so many horrible things, watched so many people die, and he's basically given up on life in general. He's driven in a one-thought mind, so he's so unhindged and dangerous - more dangerous than John even suspects which spells bad news for our beloved Winchesters. The next two chapters are just going to be packed with emotions and are really the heart of this story. These past three chapters? Merely just the stepping stones. I'm really excited about it, and I hope you are too.

Re: Definitely worth it! 1sweet_twilight March 11 2008, 21:22:34 UTC

Okay, that does it! I am just incredibly excited now! I can't wait to see what kind of crazy, dangerous trouble this loony Ben is going to cause for them! I'm a little bit scared though too. I hope things turn out all right! I'm still excited though. I cannot wait for the next update! Keep doing whatever it is that you do to make these stories such an incredible read!

Re: Definitely worth it! seriously_sam March 12 2008, 19:48:14 UTC

I live to build up all the hype. Haha. Ben is going to be causing some problems and crossing the line in more ways than one. I'm extremely excited to write out how things progress with Ben and the Winchesters. It's one hellevua chapter four, I'll tell you that.

Thank you for your kind words. Your reviews and comments always seem to make me smile. So, keep them coming!

Re: Definitely worth it! 1sweet_twilight March 12 2008, 19:59:03 UTC

I'm glad that my reviews make you feel all warm and fuzzy on the inside! Haha, no worries, they'll keep coming as long as you keep writing, and as long as I keep breathing, or don't go blind, whichever one comes first.
I can't wait for the next one!

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