Comments | serena_took: The Strength of His Convictions

serena_took

The Strength of His Convictions - Rorschach/Dan fic

Jul 01, 2009 18:41

( There is a stillness to the night. . . )

Comments 7

findmyantidrug July 2 2009, 01:00:08 UTC

Nnnf, this was hot. Oddly enough, my favorite line is probably Maybe he is becoming paranoid, like they all whisper about him behind his back (he has heard all the things they have said about him) I really like the way you write about what their partnership was like, and how Rorschach still wishes, just a little, to go back to that. I like the comparisons you make between the now of Rorschach watching Dan and the past - like his hands that stitched him together, for example.

Uh, that is to say, HELL YEAH the world needs more voyeur!Rorschach. Dan's door is gonna suffer from this, though, I'm sure.

serena_took July 3 2009, 15:18:41 UTC

Thank you so much! I love your fic so much, so this means a lot. :-)

por_queeee July 2 2009, 21:58:12 UTC

HOT. Voyeur!schach is officially the best premise for fic ever because every time I read it I love it.

serena_took July 3 2009, 15:19:18 UTC

Thanks! :-D Voyeur-Shach is the best!

tonks07 July 3 2009, 17:57:02 UTC

Voyeur!schach is my fav kink in this fandom so I LOVE this! I enjoy your Rorschach voice-very believable. And I especially love this bit Maybe he is becoming paranoid, like they all whisper about him behind his back (he has heard all the things they have said about him). And what an ending. The last couple lines killed me!

masterfedora July 4 2009, 02:13:35 UTC

Well done. Very hot and very IC. Poor conflicted Rorschach.

I am SO begging... mahala_ac July 6 2009, 08:30:25 UTC

for a SEQUEL! EEEEEEE! so FRICKING hot! *wipes brow* *SQUEALHUGLOMP O' DESPERATE JOYLUV* Or MOAR chapters...I am WILLING to BEG here...*starts groveling piteously with a dash of whimpering puppy look* lolllllll

Sincerely, Mahala A.C.