FIC: If You Were the Last Man on Earth: Book Two (1/3)

Oct 22, 2008 13:40

Title: If You Were the Last Man on Earth
Book Two: Spring (1/3)
Author: seraphtrevs
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: NC-17
Word count: This part: 4,027
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made, etc.
Spoiler alert: up through the end of season 2
Summary: AU - It's been a year and a half since the Shanti virus dropped and devastated the planet. After refusing to ( Read more... )

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seraphtrevs October 22 2008, 22:27:58 UTC
My favorite thing is when people use Capital Letters to be Humorous.

Hee, me too!

And this? I have always wondered what crap like that actually means, so to have Sylar start out with something so awful and trite was really amazing.

Ahaha, me neither. When I was browsing through the relationship advice books (and it was incredibly embarrassing checking those out from the library, let me tell you), stuff like that came up all the time.

His immediate judging of Sylar’s single-mindedness, followed soon afterwards by a bit of self-awareness. Beautifully done there (plus the dialogue about the watches was paced perfectly for subtle hilarity). Then the part about knowing that he’s getting tipsy but not wanting to let Sylar be right in bossing him around was just perfect.

Thank you! I wanted to set up that, underneath it all, the two of them do have some similarities in their personalities, which of course does not sit well with Mohinder. And I've not entirely made up my mind, but I think that Sylar's comment about Mohinder's wine-drinking might have been manipulation on his part - Mohinder's contrariness certainly makes it easy - just tell him to do something, and he'll do the exact opposite!

I have never read a sex scene like that and it was fabulously hilarious and REAL. Sometimes sex is just, “Ummmm? Alright.”

Yes, exactly! I have a kink for awkward sex, because when you think about it, it is sort of ridiculous.

Stuff like that was adorable, but then he’s also so awkwardly creepy, like the line about loving to watch Mohinder eat. The sentiment was sweet, but yeah, creepy

Yay! Sylar is so nice in this fic, but I want to make it true to the character. I'm glad he still feels creepy to you.

And then, in addition to writing the greatest Mohinder and Sylar stuff ever, you ALSO add in these wonderful Truths About Life. This is such a beautifully put explanation of a very real phenomenon that everyone faces.

Aw! #^_^# That makes me feel awesome inside. :D

I have to admit, I was pouting again. You really know how to make me feel better about things not being as long. Last time with the sneak peek and this time with the A/N. You are very sweet. :-)

No problem! Although it is kind of self-serving on my part - I want to reassure you all so you'll keep reading! ;D

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