FIC: If You Were the Last Man on Earth: Book One (4/4)

[seraphtrevs]

Title: If You Were the Last Man on Earth
Book One: Winter (4/4)
Author: seraphtrevs
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: R
Word count: This part: 2,294
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made, etc.
Spoiler alert: up through the end of season 2
Summary: AU - It's been a year and a half since the Shanti virus dropped and devastated the planet. After refusing to

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[seraphtrevs]

Thank you!

What I really like about this section is how it's based around Mohinder's "recovery", and that we get to see him getting better and better, but still maintaining his stubborn goals and desires.

YES, this, exactly. Mohinder is, more than anything IMO, tenacious, so it's going to be a long road for these two.

You've achieved a great balance between the amusing moments and the deep, introspective ones, which I really like.

Yay! Always good to hear. :D

It's so heartbreaking, yet I love how you included this little moment because it serves as a reminder of how horrible Sylar was, and that his attempt to be a kinder, more caring Sylar isn't going to convince Mohinder as quickly as Sylar would like.

Yes, exactly - he's being such a sweetheart here that I thought it was important to include a reminder that he's, well, a psychopath who has done some very, very bad things.

How could I almost forget about the flower?! It's another thing I love about this section, and I think that the ending is great because it exudes a sense of hope, which is - possibly - what Mohinder needs now more than ever.

I'm glad it worked - I was so ;_; at the end of this chapter, but I didn't want to leave it on a hopeless note.