FIC: If You Were the Last Man on Earth: Book One (4/4)

[seraphtrevs]

Title: If You Were the Last Man on Earth
Book One: Winter (4/4)
Author: seraphtrevs
Pairing: Mohinder/Sylar
Rating: R
Word count: This part: 2,294
Disclaimer: Not mine, no profit made, etc.
Spoiler alert: up through the end of season 2
Summary: AU - It's been a year and a half since the Shanti virus dropped and devastated the planet. After refusing to

Comments

[vejiicakes]

I just broke up into hysterical giggles at Sylar's relationship book section. From the thoroughly cheesy to the thoroughly tacky (I'm just trying to envision what was going through Sylar's mind when he picked up any manual/guide that ended in "Honey"..) to the OMG GAY KAMA SUTRA. Oh, Mohinder. Oh, Sylar XD

I love how prickly Mohinder is being (which he has every reason to be, of course), and how his resistance to this entire scenario is manifesting itself. From the active and conceptual (the survival books) to the downright petty (HAW HAW, I HAVE VOMIT-MOUTH). For some reason, the little flower makes me very hopeful. I don't even know for what.

I really like your writing style! It's very comfortable to read and the narrative variations between quiet, introspective moments and humor have a pleasant..whatsit to the rhythm of the writing. I don't know where that comment was going. But IN CONCLUSION YOU RITE GUD, and I look forward to every new installment in the days before Wed/Sat ^_^

A very dim lightbulb went off over Mohinder’s head. He just had to sleep with him. That would solve everything.

*snigger* I actually sat back and did a slow, dry clap for the man. You're so smart, Mohinder. SO SMART.

[seraphtrevs]

Thank you! :D

I just broke up into hysterical giggles at Sylar's relationship book section.

Hee, I was giggling while I was writing it. :D I can just imagine Sylar being all "Hmm, I've never had a relationship - I know! I'll learn it like how I learned to build a greenhouse - with manuals full of expert advice! Mohinder is as good as mine!"

For some reason, the little flower makes me very hopeful. I don't even know for what.

Awww, I'm glad! This was kind of a downer of a chapter in some ways - but Mohinder's will has not been vanquished! \o/

I really like your writing style! It's very comfortable to read and the narrative variations between quiet, introspective moments and humor have a pleasant..whatsit to the rhythm of the writing.

:DDDDDDDDD Yay! That's been my biggest challenge, so it's awesome to hear it flows well!

*snigger* I actually sat back and did a slow, dry clap for the man. You're so smart, Mohinder. SO SMART.

Ahahahaha, yes - Mohinder r very smrt because of his many learnings. Poor Mohinder. XD