ribbon and the ring chapter 2

[seraphim_grace]

Comments

[star_faerie]

That was a brilliant chapter- so they all got dragged in this time. Wow... Poor Duo, he wanted to escape it and he's been dragged back.

[seraphim_grace]

it got cut down a lot because there was a lot of useless info in there that got pared down to make the action scene more violent.
I'll be kinder to duo this time, I have other people to pick on. (snarf)

[star_faerie]

Good, good!! *huggles her duo plushie* lolz.

The action scene was brilliant :) Suitably 'action-ie' (sorry couldn't think of the word I wanted to use).