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darklou September 15 2015, 12:20:59 UTC
Interesting!

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serafina19 September 18 2015, 04:12:52 UTC
That's a word I'll take. Hopefully you enjoy the next chapter!

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malugargula September 16 2015, 02:53:37 UTC
Can't wait for more :)
Really great

And I hate this blue sob screen of death
Had a problem with the cam usb and had this damn thing 20, 30 times a day

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serafina19 September 18 2015, 04:13:40 UTC
You won't have to wait long, fortunately, the next chapter is up now. Thanks for the feedback for this chapter though :)

And yes, blue screen of deaths suck. A lot.

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kachica September 16 2015, 05:22:12 UTC
enjoyed the update and can't wait for the next one!

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serafina19 September 18 2015, 04:14:01 UTC
Thanks! Chapter 3 is live now.

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hellzz_on_earth September 16 2015, 19:22:18 UTC
Chloe needs to stay, with Ollie and the guys!!!
Loved Bart finding her and getting her to go to the fair. Than Victor coming to get her for dinner was perfect.
I was really glad Canary brought up the guys needing help to Chloe. I think they can help her in return. She's unsure of herself and the good she's capable of as a friend and Watchtower. Really hope when she talks to Ollie that she changes her mind and stays in Star City. Please!!!
Oh gosh Clark just had to come and have her reassure him she was going to come back "home". Get over yourself. Chloe needs to do something for her for a change!!!
Thanks for the awesome update.
Can't wait for more as always.
Happy writing.

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serafina19 September 18 2015, 04:16:05 UTC
Chloe's friendship with each team member is interesting to me, so I'm glad you enjoyed each one's interaction with Chloe. They really do bring out the best in each other.

But while Chloe means what she told Clark, that doesn't mean she's going to lose touch with the team though.

Next chapter is up if you want to know more :)

Thank you!

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hellzz_on_earth September 18 2015, 06:25:21 UTC
That's good she won't lose touch with them all.
I'm off to read the next chapter.

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So cruel ... voz_76 September 17 2015, 00:44:26 UTC
Evil cliffee!!! I love the incorporation of the JL. Please keep it coming. I miss Bart, Victor, & AC. It's interesting that Chloe and Canary don't have a back story. Will their relationship be developed? Will you go in depth about what happened between Chloe and Davis? It seems you might paint it with a grey brush instead of the usual black.

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Re: So cruel ... serafina19 September 18 2015, 04:19:45 UTC
Does it make it better that you only have to wait a few days for the next chapter? Because I meant what I said, it's posted now.

As the team didn't come back after season 6, to me, that means that Dinah and Chloe had never met before. Unfortunately, their relationship doesn't get too much more attention, as the focus shifts more to Chloe healing herself and establishing a stronger bond with Oliver. Hopefully that's okay.

I ended up adding more detail between what happened between Davis and Chloe than my original plan, but hopefully you enjoy it.

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