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Passion Leaves a Trace: A Day Alone

Jun 08, 2014 10:25

Author: serafina19
Title: Passion Leaves a Trace: A Day Alone
Series Summary: It started as a simple arrangement, but with their knowledge and understanding of each other, it left a trace of something more to come, something to build beyond what they expected.
Segment Summary: They had experienced so much alone, but today, that concept didn’t seem so ( Read more... )

fanfiction, series: passion leaves a trace, oliver queen, title: a day alone, chloe sullivan, one-shot, smallville

Comments 10

malugargula June 8 2014, 17:58:48 UTC

really great series
I'm loving to know what's inside their heads :)

serafina19 June 17 2014, 04:30:21 UTC

Thanks! It's fun to write, so I'm glad you enjoy it.

kachica June 9 2014, 02:46:19 UTC

I'm enjoying reading your take on the missing bits.

serafina19 June 17 2014, 04:30:55 UTC

It's fun filling in these blanks, so thank you :)

escapist90 June 9 2014, 10:40:39 UTC

Gorgeous banner. I keep staring at it.

Fave parts :

He should have seen this coming. It almost felt too good to be true that the leads were falling in their direction, and sure enough, once Tess had spoken the word Watchtower, it took everything he had not to lose it right in front of her. Fortunately, Tess’ fear for Clark gave Oliver what he needed to help, even if it was from the sidelines ( ... )

serafina19 June 17 2014, 04:33:03 UTC

Good to know I'm not the only one. Ara did a great job on that one.

It's nice to see that some of your favourite moments were some of the quieter parts. This series kind of hinges on that, so thanks!

chlollifan84 June 9 2014, 10:56:04 UTC

Awesome story!! I love the way you're revisiting the show.
And this banner is beautiful!

serafina19 June 17 2014, 04:34:42 UTC

It's been fun to re-visit this series. I'm not sure how much canon I can write anymore, but until I finish this series, I'll always have an outlet. And I agree about the banner, it's probably one of my favourites from her... although she never ceases to amaze me.

Thanks!

scout09 June 9 2014, 17:15:36 UTC

*Sigh*. I'm so happy you're continuing this series. I feel like there's this neverending well of emotion left to tap from Season 9 and I'll never tire of reading about it. Your strengths as a writer really shine exploring this point in time of their relationship. Chloe's struggles acknowledging their evolving bond as teammates and Oliver's utter relief at hearing her voice were so touching.

I like that you added little details like Chloe teaching him some database specifics. It compliments nicely his archery lesson(s - you know there were multiples) and slowly weaving every part of their lives together. I also liked the idea that Chloe witnessed his conversation with Tess. That moment afterward when he sees her and his entire being lights up is so memorable to me and signifies a monumental change in their relationship - much more than Chloe's understated dialogue that ends that scene. Beautiful.

Sorry if this seems disjointed - I feel like it is. I've been up since 5:45 and my brain is not cooperating.

serafina19 June 17 2014, 04:43:55 UTC

Your comment seems okay to me, but it's been a long day (week/month(s)) for me ( ... )