Realities

[sepulchre_angel]

This is actually chapter 33 of my story on fanfiction.net which I would try to link you to, but I can't seem to figure out how to imbed links. Because I'm dumb with this whole computer thing. XP Anyways, I posted it here because I thought it was interesting and I wanted to share it. Just to get as many opinions as I could, because it's a bit of

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[rhaeii]

Wow. Just... Wow. I had tears at the first one. And I "awwww"'ed at Tailor!Schach, especially when he recognized the familiarity and hoped to see him again. They were all beautiful, I loved your use of poetry and the feel of a video montage as the scenes played forth. I almost could hear music in the background and the fade to black and and... It wa beautiful. Just beautiful :3

[sepulchre_angel]

Hee, thank you! I basically lined up all my nerdness in a row and went READY GO. I even took stuff out of the original draft because it was too long. XPP

(also, in response to the art thing is YEAH, you can totally put my art thing if you really want to. XD It makes me happy you like it!)

ALSO I HEAR TELL CH. 17 IS UP FOR YOU I SHALL GO AND READ NOW. *is nervous for the boys* D:

[rhaeii]

Neediness is an awesome thing between friends :D
I squee'd when I saw the line "Its hour come 'round at last" because I had totally planned on that being the title of the last chapter of "Sundial", haha! Nerds Unite!!

It is a beautiful story, even now I kinda read it as watching a music video, some of it in black and white, some with that video thing where the flash-back scenes are kinda faded in the background... Stuff like that! I MIGHT HAVE TO DRAW STUFF FOR THIS! :D What do you think the song would be for this if it were a video?

Haha yeah I put up the next chapter just for you :3

[sepulchre_angel]

YAY NERDOM. XD

Also: YOU ARE TEN THOUSAND FLAVORS OF AWESOME. As for music... heh. I must confess that I wrote this while I was listening to "Don't Stop Believing" (the Glee vsn no less! D:) and my roommate was listening to The Fray. SECRET TIME: my writing music is basically Glee, The Fray, and atm, Princess and the Frog, I don't even know. DDD: SO MAYBE IM TWELVE WHAT. sooo, long story short, I DUNNO. XD

[rhaeii]

My iPod has so much Disney music, don't even know... *hides in shame*
Lessee! My writing music is pretty random. For "The Thirteenth Hour" I listened to "I will not Bow" by Breaking Benjamins. For "Sundial" I've been listening to "On My Own" by Three Days Grace. It just seems to fit the mood I guess. Poor poor Rorschach. I definately abuse the poor guy :(

Also. "I'm Still Here" from Treasure Planet. I listen to that for my "Dan Chapters". Don't know why, it just fits him in his current traumatized state of mind I suppose XD

[sepulchre_angel]

IM STILL HERE. That song is MAGNIFICANT! We obviously are music friends as well. XD (in fact, I read this to my roommate and we are listening to it right now! XD)

But yeah, I think the best WM songs I can think of right now are "Turpentine" by Brandi Carlisle and "How to Save a Life" by The Fray. Good music is good. XD

[rhaeii]

Iiiiiii want a moment to be reeeeeeal
wanna touch thiiiiiiiiings I don't feeeeeeeeel
wanna hold on
and feeeeeeel I belong...

And how can the world want me to change?
They're the ones that stay the same
they don't know me
cause I'm not here...

Music buddies an' Watchmen buddies an' Rorspenders buddies are three very good kinds of buddies! :D

[sepulchre_angel]

YAY BUDDIES! XDD (and now that song is stuck in my head again... TO ITUNES!)

[rhaeii]

I downloaded it to my iPod XD

aaaaaaaaaaand Sundial is done!! :D