Give and Take

[septemberoses]

Title: Give and Take
Author: septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood
Rating: NC17 for Top!Godric
Pairing: Eric/Godric
Word Count: 5200
Note: Being unable to finish some unfinished fics, I looked elsewhere; this is something of a follow up to the Dark Fic and Coda, set several months later.  This is less explicit than my usual stuff, but I wouldn't read it to

Comments

[blissy83]

Cheer up, have some Allan-looking-like-a-hobbit (and sitting on a boy) pic!



Eric's hair!!!It made me giggle that stroking his hair is all the foreplay Eric gets!!, the image as you already know Is so hot to me. And what could be hotter than this calm, powerful and horny Godric?.

God, this line cracked me up "The word inconsiderate popped into Eric's mind at one point"

And for some reason (Eric acting like a schoolgirl), this dialogue made me giggle, too:

"I had to see to something. But when I came back, you'd gone."
"Oh." Eric laughed at himself, feeling his own heart lifting. Well, there were worse things.

And the power play, the fangs!

"And then Eric thought he understood.
The sex they'd been having recently, while verging on rape, was no huge hardship for Eric, and Godric knew"

I don't have a feet kink, but this line was so perfect "A groan came from somewhere deep within him. Those feet."

[septemberoses]

Oh that's a lovely sight. Hobbit-Allan. I just PMed you. Also, how do I get in on the perv discussions with you and Blocky? We could get Blocky to torment us with vague hints about her Daddy porn, and I could blather on about Godric being a torturer until you were bored...

One of the many, many fun parts of G/E for me is inventing new kinks (when not writing about exiswting ones.) So the entire idea of "fang play" -- and Eric being forced to submit like that -- was this weirdly erotic thing. It was originally just a passing thing: Godric tells Eric to put his fangs away (which struck me as a very submissive thing to have to do.) But the whole scene took on an intense appeal for me the longer I wrote it.

Dude, what more foreplay does Eric need? I say take his hair down and you're good. I hope Godric fucks him until he's sweaty and his hair is tangled in knots.

[blissy83]

GUH, FYI I always read your fics before I go to sleep, and sometimes it pays hahaha

[septemberoses]

Well, considering that I dream snippets much of what winds up in here, that seems only fair.