Comments | septemberoses: Give and Take

septemberoses

Give and Take

Feb 05, 2010 21:44

Title: Give and Take
Author: septemberoses
Fandom: True Blood
Rating: NC17 for Top!Godric
Pairing: Eric/Godric
Word Count: 5200
Note: Being unable to finish some unfinished fics, I looked elsewhere; this is something of a follow up to the Dark Fic and Coda, set several months later. This is less explicit than my usual stuff, but I wouldn't read it to ( Read more... )

rating: nc17, pairing: eric/godric, fanfiction

Comments 52

redangel618 February 6 2010, 06:53:52 UTC

huh. it turns out toppy godric ignoring eric in public and making him squirm is a kink of mine. i think i'll have to re-read this about a hundred times now. thanks.

septemberoses February 6 2010, 23:55:54 UTC

Top!Godric is my favorite flavor in the whole world. Particularly when he's calm and gentle like that, when he could basically rip Eric's head off, as blockycurvature noted.

keenoled February 6 2010, 13:07:49 UTC

Oh, that was *niiice*. :)

septemberoses February 6 2010, 23:56:20 UTC

Eh, it was good for me too. :) I hadn't been able to write, so I was thrilled to come up with something.

beccers4469 February 6 2010, 15:48:47 UTC

O-h m-y g-o-d.

Holy hell.

That was amazing, loved it!

septemberoses February 7 2010, 00:36:43 UTC

So glad you enjoyed it! I haven't been able to finish anything, I was worried. Thanks for commenting.

eternitybreaks February 6 2010, 18:01:17 UTC

One word.

Damn. ♥

septemberoses February 6 2010, 23:56:41 UTC

Thanks! It's always nice to know that somebody's reading.

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septemberoses February 7 2010, 14:53:00 UTC

You know, the reason I dragged Gruochrua into this in the first place is because I wondered if all the details would bore the crap out of everyone. And I guess not.

"Unnngh, I love this implacable Godric, so calmly taking what he wants. It is so, so fiercely hot." That Godric makes me weak in the knees (much as it does Eric.) And when he does that kind, gentle instructing... gah. I have trouble concentrating sometimes, just writing that. The delicious discord, as you note. I play with those sentences/ideas endlessly, enjoying crafting the details.

This could have gotten pornier. But I wanted it to stop where it did, so that the fang-play scene, which I admit I found ridiculously erotic, was the centerpiece. There is something about that visual ... in my mind, I can see Godric crouched over Eric, with his fingers in Eric's mouth. eeeee, even *typing* that makes me smile, wth. Coming up with new ways to display vampire dominance/kink, like the fang-play, is a huge part of the fun of this.

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septemberoses February 7 2010, 20:42:39 UTC

MOAR coming! The Valentine's Day fic, which is fun. And of course to balance my fluff I seem to be now doing all this backstory on Godric's delightful career as an inquisitor.

Mmmm, that pic you're using of Eric is so distracting. I look at all that musculature and then think of wee Godric, telling him to strip.

"Yes, Godric."

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