essence of butterfly | yunjae | 2/xx

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Essence of Butterfly
Chapter(s): 02/?
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: action, angst, historical, romance
Rating: R
Warnings: language, tobacco use, violence
Pairing: YunJae
Disclaimer: I do not own any known characters in this story.

Synopsis: The history of two family names collide, clashes and tangle in a way neither is willing to settle. Written

Comments

[moon1084]

fhsdjfkdsfsgjjklsfnjksemfkkemdkedfmkfdl,mb! That was my kitty telling you how much he liked this update.

This was definitely worth the effing wait. I was so so so excited about this and sorry I'm late with commenting. I've been so exhausted these past few days and I really wanted to be relaxed when I read the update.

Now, where do I start? I feel horrible for JaeJoong. His dad died trying to protect someone else. I don't blame JaeJoong for not giving up on finding the man that murdered his father.

Now on to my lovely YunJae. This is exactly the way I pictured YunJae meeting. JaeJoong is sooooo cute. LMAO at the attackers for calling JaeJoong a Homo! I loved all his "Ehhhhhhh" reactions and his pouting and the arm crossing. *squishes him*

I also found it adorable how he reacted to being busted for his stalkerish ways by YunHo. And YunHo...he is amazing with the little dash of arrogance you threw in him. Not to much and not to little. Just perfect.

I was soooooooo not expecting that kiss to happen at all. It was so so so so cute. I can't believe JaeJoong did that. He really has a lot of balls. And I think YunHo himself wasn't expecting it either or maybe he was... lol!

Okay so I'm not feeling how he intends to use YunHo though. I hope he won't hurt himself and YunHo in the process. It will only fail badly when they fall in love with each other.

PS: That scene in the market where that kid almost runs into JaeJoong was like watching a movie scene. Loved it.

By the way some of the sentences have weird indentions through out it. Must be lj messing up your post. I can't wait for the next update. *is excited to see what happens now that they've kissed*

[sentimentalenvy]

Awwwh, well send your adorable kitty my thanks! :)

Augh! I'm so glad to hear it. I don't know why it takes me forever to get these updates out. Or maybe I'm just thinking and worrying too much over little details when it's not needed. I'm glad you wanted to be ready and relaxed to read the update and just just think Oh let me zip through this update real quick.

Yeah...I wasn't planning on his dad to go so quickly, but I'm hoping that I'd still be able to include flashbacks of JJ and his dad. His dad is significant, since the whole point of the mission was triggered by what happened to his dad.

LOL, I planned on YJ meeting in a more serious scenario, but I don't know what the haaale happened. It actually turned out more fun rather than serious business, lmao! But My God it's like in the beginning their characters are serious and now it's like who the hell are you people?

Yeah, it's pretty sad. This fiction is supposed to be serious at the same time. The atmosphere of the era just makes angst fit I guess. But knowing me, I like to stick in random fluff and humor here and there. But JJ's purpose in using Yunho is essential to the development of the fic. Of course, you know me, I'm always pro for happy endings. :)

I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU NOTICED THAT! The kid nearly knocking into JJ I mean. I know it sounds silly of me but I was hoping that someone noticed the itty little bitty details! Thank you. LOL!

yeah, the stupid indents. Actually that was my doing. I was in a rush when I posted it cause I had to get to work. Actually it was perfect at first. But then I was too rushed when x-posting them in comms and the different rules within each community had me confused and somehow I ended up deleting the actual entry in my own journal. I know, stOOOOpid. So I had to repost it on my LJ and re-pimp them to the comms again. Aiyaaa.