Love Game in the Dark - yunjae, yoosu, kimin, jaechun

[sentimentalenvy]

Title: Love Game in the Dark
Chapter(s): 1/xx
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: romance
Rating: PG-13 - R
Warning(s): language (for now)
Pairing/Characters: Yunjae, Yoosu , Jaechun, Kimin.
Disclaimer: I am not their mother :\
Synopsis: Payback is a bitch but no matter what, in the end, karma bites everyone in the ass.

Comment(s): Various POVs. I will be sure

Comments

[sentimentalenvy]

LOL, I'm glad to hear it! Tysm. Just from reading the prologue, my friend claims that this story is gonna turn out emo, this is just my attempt in proving her wrong :)

[fivespice93]

I'm really enjoying this plot so far, it's very interesting. :) And your writing style is very nice, it made me feel all sorts of things for Jaejoong, but I think that, no matter how much a bitch Jaejoong was, Yunho is a bastard to do such a thing to him, by betraying and blackmailing him. :(

This is becoming one of my favorite story ( it's not even on its 2nd chapter yet xDDD) so I hope you update soon! ❤❤❤

[sentimentalenvy]

Ohh, tysm! I don't fancy writing in first person but I do feel that I'm better with it. Awh, it's alright. Yunho just wants to fight for what's right and JJ's just the kid nobody understands D: Oh how I love misunderstandings. It adds much needed drama and what people want is conflict :o!

[agnetalovek]

Interesting =D the story has so much life~~~~

[sentimentalenvy]

Haha, thank you! I'm glad to know it holds some sort of interest.

[padmik]

oh goodness, i'm excited 8DD

prologue really caught my attention too. i like that there is no real bad guy/good guy. they all have a some bad and good in them so it's very interesting~ ;)

and i love kibum and junsu and jae's mother xDD poor guys~

[sentimentalenvy]

Rofl! I'm happy to hear it :)

Aaah ty ty! Yeah, well I mean there will be some bad people. Stories are no fun when it's villain-less D: but I do admit that there are times when I do have a soft spot for the villains with actual motives that make sense. Unlike those douche bags that be all like Oh I want to take over the world just because.

Lol, I want Kibum and Junsu to be part of the comedy relief. OH, and Jae's mom 8D.

[ting5]

oohh you're writing in 1st person style..cool

love Su and Kibum, they brightens Jae's life even more ne XDD

Ahh Yunho..why would he do that..tsk tsk tsk

I'll def be looking forward to nxt chap ^^

[sentimentalenvy]

Yeah, it's pretty rare that I'll resort to first person. I like to think of Kibum and Junsu as JJ's source of happy light :o & yes, it is time for Yunho to do some JJ-sleuthing :3. I'm glad you've decided to follow on this story as well. Thank you 8D!