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Line of Trust - Tora/Saga - 2/xx

Feb 05, 2009 03:50

Title: Line of Trust
Chapter(s): 2/xx
Author: sentimentalenvy
Genre: AU/Romance/little angst?
Rating: PG-13 - R
Warnings: language
Pairing/Characters: Tora/Saga, Shou/Hiroto, Shou/Saga, Tora/Nao (one sided)
Synopsis: Saga is thrilled when Tora accepts his feelings, and he is even more ecstatic to know that Tora is slowly building up the courage to try. But a ( Read more... )

p: shou/saga, p: tora/saga, f: line of trust, p: tora/nao, b: alice nine., p: shou/hiroto, g: j-rock

Comments 15

frenchxpanties February 5 2009, 15:02:12 UTC

Ooh. Nao is soooo funnnayy. And he finally makes an appearance. Oh yay!

"Go make me food slave" For some reason that made me LOL so hard...*coughs*

Your ending was still pretty good. -___- Srsly, it was. And of course, love your writing as per norm. XDD

AHAHAHAH, FIRST COMMENT IS MIIIINEEEEE. LOL.

sentimentalenvy February 6 2009, 09:08:14 UTC

rofl I kinda liked the way he kinda hopped right into the scene all creepy and shit XP But I don't want people to think badly of him though o:! haha XD You know I pick on Tora out of love D8 Girl, it's called tough love D8 Kind of like how I treat you D8

No T___T srsly if you had seen what I had before T__T! Thanks for putting up with my bitching -_-; I feel sorry for you to have to deal with me D: ((whatchu mean by per norm D8?!))

frenchxpanties February 6 2009, 15:50:25 UTC

Hahah! Yeah, yeah! How can anybody think evil Nao?! *gaspshockhorror*

DDD8 How could you?! Ehhh, well. Tough love is better than nothing. XDD

That good? ;___; LOL, no, thank YOU for putting up with MY bitching. ROFL.

(I love your writing. As usual. AS USUAL. AS PER NORMAL. LOL. I talk weird)

michiwantsmochi February 9 2009, 03:19:04 UTC

That's right biyatch D8 lol

ohh per normal! I see I see o_o !

silyria February 5 2009, 16:55:53 UTC

Finally! xD
(and 2nd comment isn't that bad xD )

You know in this chapter I found a lot of interesting word games and constuctions like:
1."I'm a jealous bastard okay? You know how I am when you and Shou are always hanging around each other like fucking sticky gummy bears on an overheated pavement!"
2.Family members don't molest each other family members either
3.I think you don't know as much as you think you know This was the best! ^^

Oh, it looks like they have made it up! But I am sure that won't continue for a long time! xD especially when Nao is around xD

Thank you!

sentimentalenvy February 6 2009, 09:10:10 UTC

2nd comment is not bad at all! Thank you for taking the time to read and let me know what you think (as usual XP). *teh cling* Rofl I love how you picked out specific lines of what you like x) ~

ahaha Nao is there for comedy relief o:! I don't want people to think of him badly @_@ but as an interference, yes. hur hur XP

silyria February 6 2009, 22:07:17 UTC

^^
Well, those phrases are good, I think I am gonna use them as a quotes!

Yup, this chapter wouldn't be so good without Nao (Despite I am not big fan of his ^^)

pulse_wriggles February 5 2009, 17:20:58 UTC

Ohh awesome update!! Sorry you went through all the trouble... but I still found it worth it~ I can't wait for the next update! Thanks for everything! XD

sentimentalenvy February 6 2009, 09:11:18 UTC

You're such a sweetheart for saying that T__T. Thanks. I just knew that I had to get something out for this story in particular. Thank you thank you >_< ~!

rechino_reno February 6 2009, 03:25:00 UTC

nice chap ^^
sad thing that Saga still not completely trust Tora though *sigh*
update soon hon ^_^

sentimentalenvy February 6 2009, 09:12:26 UTC

I know >_< I need to make things progress more between Tora and Saga but beginning chapters are always character introductions before I get to other dilemmas lol. Thank you \@@/ ~ !

beyondtheremix February 6 2009, 09:24:22 UTC

That really sucks so thank you for updating!!!
I really like this story and I wasn't expecting Nao there XDDDDD
He's hilarious, but in a sneaky sort of way, like you know he's more mature than he actually acts...

I <3 Saga for wanting to settle down ^^ seems like, if he's Tora's first he's obviously something special. Poor Saga needs to be more confident ;__;

sentimentalenvy February 6 2009, 09:35:21 UTC

oh my god you scared me at first when I saw the first words 'That really sucks' o_o lol. I like the way you think o: o: That's exactly how Nao is! Yeah I had add Nao in there >_<; I'm so tired of how the drummer always gets cut out from pairings so I want him to participate. He's one of those people you can't bear to ignore D8< !

Lol well Saga doesn't wanna be the 40 year old virgin rofl XD; That's too long and life is too short to not get laid ;x. Yeah Saga does T___T but I'm gonna make Tora work his butt off too o: .

Thanks so much for your awesome comment XD ~ it definitely put a smile on my face XP ~

beyondtheremix February 7 2009, 06:10:17 UTC

LOL NO! I meant how your computer died XDDDDDD ahahahaha that's the sucky part.
Saga would make a hilarious 40 yr old virgin lololol wait wait 40 yr old virgin Pon would be so much crack! XDDDD he used to look so innocent ~ curse of the baby face<3

Speaking of whom, my heart twinges at Shou and I hope underaged ShouPon will be happy XD